Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 문장 구조와 단어 선택에서 혼동이 있습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 '좋아한다/좋아하지 않는다'라는 주제문으로 시작하지 않았고, 의미가 불분명한 표현(예: 'I'm not Lily', 'not flown to take the picture')과 반복('picture of taking picture')이 있습니다. 개선을 위해서는 간단하고 명확한 주제문을 먼저 말한 뒤, 이유나 경험을 한두 문장으로 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. 또한 불필요한 발언은 생략하고 정확한 동사와 어휘를 사용하세요. 예시의 문장 길이는 3~4문장 이내로 유지하세요.

Exemplo: No, I don't take many pictures of views. I rarely go out specifically to photograph scenery because I usually spend my free time on other hobbies. However, when I'm traveling I sometimes take photos to remember the places I visited.

Sugestão: 의미 전달은 가능하지만 문법과 단어 사용에서 오류가 있습니다('Where I prefer few of the countryside', 'ruler due'). 먼저 간단한 주제문으로 선호를 밝히고, 이유를 연결어로 이어 주세요(예: 'because', 'since', 'so'). 구체적인 이유와 빈도나 예를 한 두 문장으로 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 제한하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer views in the countryside rather than in the city. Since I live in Seoul, I often miss open spaces and nature, so I enjoy visiting rural areas to relax and breathe fresh air.

Sugestão: 대체로 의미가 명확하고 이유(취미로 등산함)를 제시해 좋았습니다. 다만 시제 일관성('It was amazing')과 표현 자연스러움을 개선하면 더 좋습니다. 또한 linking word(예: 'because', 'so')와 구체적 세부사항(어떤 산, 어떤 계절)으로 답변을 풍부하게 하세요. 문장은 2~4개로 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

Exemplo: I prefer views in Korea because I often go climbing in the mountains here. I climb almost every week and there are many beautiful viewpoints, especially in the autumn when the leaves change color. Those landscapes feel more familiar and meaningful to me.

× Well, I'm not Lily, I am not flown to take the picture.

✓ Well, I'm not Lily; I'm not fond of taking pictures.

The phrase 'not flown to take the picture' is incorrect English. The intended meaning is likely 'not fond of' (an adjective phrase meaning 'do not like'). Use of 'fond of' with a gerund (taking) is correct. Also 'pictures' plural is natural. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect clauses. Suggestion: replace the incorrect phrase with 'not fond of taking pictures.'

× So actually I don't have an experience about the picture of taking picture different views.

✓ So actually I don't have any experience taking pictures of different views.

The original has awkward structure and incorrect articles and word order. Use 'any experience' for lack of experience, 'taking pictures' is the correct verb + -ing form, and 'of different views' correctly modifies pictures. Suggestion: use 'I don't have any experience taking pictures of different views.'

× Where I prefer few of the countryside.

✓ I prefer the countryside.

'Where I prefer few of the countryside' is ungrammatical. The question asked about preference; reply should be 'I prefer the countryside.' Avoid 'where' at the start and 'few of' which doesn't make sense here. If you mean 'some parts of the countryside,' say so explicitly.

× You know, it is because I am living in Seoul which is the capital city of Korea.

✓ You know, it's because I live in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea.

Use simple present 'I live' for a current state rather than 'I am living' (although both can be possible, 'I live' is more natural for permanent residence). Add commas around the nonrestrictive clause 'which is the capital city of Korea.' Suggestion: use 'I live in Seoul, which is the capital city of Korea.'

× So sometimes I miss some ruler due.

✓ So sometimes I miss the rural view.

'Miss some ruler due' is nonsensical. Likely intended 'miss rural areas' or 'miss the countryside.' Use 'miss the rural scenery' or 'miss the countryside.' Suggestion: replace with 'I miss the countryside' or 'I miss rural scenery.'

× Well, definitely, I prefer the view of Korea.

✓ Well, definitely, I prefer the views in Korea.

'Prefer the view of Korea' is awkward; when comparing places, use 'the views in Korea' or 'Korean views.' 'Prefer' is present simple and correct; adjust noun to plural 'views' or 'the view in Korea' depending on meaning. Suggestion: say 'I prefer the views in Korea.'

× Actually my hobby is climbing, so I go to the mountain every week for seeing viewpoint.

✓ Actually, my hobby is climbing, so I go to the mountains every week to see viewpoints.

Use plural 'mountains' or 'a mountain' depending on meaning. 'For seeing viewpoint' is incorrect collocation; use 'to see viewpoints' or 'to see the view.' Use 'to' + verb for purpose. Suggestion: 'I go to the mountains every week to see viewpoints.'

× It was amazing and fascinating for me.

✓ It is amazing and fascinating to me.

When describing a habitual or general feeling about climbing and views, present simple 'is' fits better than past 'was.' If referring to a specific trip, 'was' could be OK. Also 'to me' is more natural than 'for me' in this context. Suggestion: use 'It is amazing and fascinating to me.'