Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "the beauty and diversity of people" instead of "the beauty of and diversity of people").

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing landscapes, portraits and food, but my favourite is portrait photography because it captures people's expressions and unique features. For example, a close-up of someone's face can reveal emotion and cultural details that tell a story.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases like "a whole lot of vibes"; choose precise vocabulary (e.g., "peaceful atmosphere"). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because the countryside has mountains and lush greenery, which create a peaceful atmosphere. For instance, walking by a mountain trail in the morning makes me feel relaxed and inspired to take photos.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear statement, then contrast two ideas using linking words (e.g., "however"), and give a specific example or reason. Correct grammar ("its own unique views", "other countries' views"). Avoid sentence fragments.

Exemplo: I appreciate the views in my country because they reflect local culture and landscapes; however, I'm also curious about views abroad. For example, I would like to photograph foreign skyscrapers and wildlife to compare how architecture and nature differ across countries.

× I believe that every country has their own unique views and in my case I appreciate the views in my country, but I'm also curious of how the other countries views will look.

✓ I believe that every country has its own unique views and, in my case, I appreciate the views in my country, but I'm also curious about how the other countries' views will look.

Replace plural pronoun 'their' with singular possessive 'its' to agree with singular 'every country' (subject-pronoun agreement). Add comma after 'and' clause for clarity. Use 'about' after 'curious' (fixed preposition). Add possessive apostrophe 'countries'' to show views belong to other countries. These changes correct pronoun agreement, preposition use, and possessive form.

× They are both great on their own but personally I prefer the view in rural areas because there are mountains, there are green sceneries and it's nature.

✓ They are both great on their own, but personally I prefer views in rural areas because there are mountains, green scenery, and nature.

Change 'the view in rural areas' to 'views in rural areas' to match plural 'They' (subject) and the meaning. Remove repeated 'there are' for concision. Use uncountable noun 'scenery' instead of 'sceneries'. Remove 'it's' before 'nature' because 'nature' is a noun listed with other nouns, not described by 'it is'. Also add comma before 'but' for clarity.

× It's a whole lot of vibes and it's refreshing.

✓ It gives a lot of good vibes and feels refreshing.

Original 'It's a whole lot of vibes' uses informal and awkward noun phrase; use verb 'gives' and adjective 'refreshing' to create a natural English expression. 'Feels refreshing' pairs subject with appropriate verb. This corrects adjective/adverb usage and improves naturalness.

× I like taking landscape photos, portrait photos, and food pictures, but my favorite photo to take is portrait because I love seeing the details and the beauty of and diversity of people.

✓ I like taking landscape photos, portrait photos, and food pictures, but my favorite type to take is portraits because I love seeing the details, the beauty, and the diversity of people.

Change 'my favorite photo to take is portrait' to 'my favorite type to take is portraits' for natural number agreement and wording. Also remove misplaced 'of' after 'beauty' and add commas to separate items in the list. This fixes pronoun/number agreement and improves sentence structure.