Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar, plurality and word forms (e.g., 'a park', 'interesting buildings', 'portraits of friends'). Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like 'and' or 'also' correctly to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often take photos in a local park and around my university because I enjoy capturing natural scenes and interesting buildings. For example, I like photographing autumn trees and the campus library façade when the light is good.

Sugestão: Clarify your main idea first (topic sentence) and avoid unclear phrases ('I prepared the view', 'future day'). Correct word choice and grammar: use 'prefer rural areas' and 'quiet atmosphere'. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' but keep sentences logical and specific (give one clear reason and one example).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the quiet atmosphere and natural scenery help me relax. For instance, I enjoy photographing misty fields at sunrise because the soft light creates a peaceful mood.

Sugestão: Use correct vocabulary and plural forms ('buildings', 'other countries', 'architecture'). Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give a concise, specific example. Avoid small grammar mistakes and make sentences more natural and fluent.

Exemplo: I usually prefer views in other countries because the architecture and scenery can be very different from home. For example, when I visited Venice, I loved walking along the canals and photographing the historic buildings and narrow streets.

× I often take pictures in different places such as park and around my university campus because I like capturing natural scenes and interesting building.

✓ I often take pictures in different places such as the park and around my university campus because I like capturing natural scenes and interesting buildings.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'park' and plural form 'buildings' needed. Use 'the park' when referring to a specific nearby park; 'building' should be plural to match 'interesting' and refer to multiple structures. Suggestion: include 'the' for specific locations and make nouns agree in number.

× I also enjoy taking portrait of friend when we hang out.

✓ I also enjoy taking portraits of friends when we hang out.

Incorrect article and singular/plural issues: 'portrait' should be plural 'portraits' and 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the speaker refers to more than one occurrence or person; no article is needed. Use plural nouns to indicate general habits.

× I prepared the view in the rural area because the countryside inspired me more than ever since the natural scenery and quite atmosphere helped me relax and feel less stressed, so I enjoy taking future day.

✓ I chose a view in the rural area because the countryside inspires me more than ever: the natural scenery and quiet atmosphere help me relax and feel less stressed, so I enjoy taking photos there on future days.

Multiple issues: 'prepared the view' is incorrect — use 'chose a view'. Tense and verb forms adjusted to present simple ('inspires', 'help') to express a general preference. 'Quite' is wrong word; should be 'quiet'. 'Taking future day' is ungrammatical — use 'taking photos there on future days' or 'in the future'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for intent, correct adjective 'quiet', and clarify 'future days' or 'in the future'.

× I prepared the view in the rural area because the countryside inspired me more than ever since the natural scenery and quite atmosphere helped me relax and feel less stressed, so I enjoy taking future day.

✓ I chose a view in the rural area because the countryside inspires me more than ever: the natural scenery and quiet atmosphere help me relax and feel less stressed, so I enjoy taking photos there in the future.

Adjective 'quite' used incorrectly; correct word is 'quiet' to describe a calm atmosphere. Also rephrased ending to 'in the future' for clarity. Suggestion: check similar-looking words and ensure correct adjective choice.

× I usually prefer bills in other country because the scenery and architects are often very different from what I see at home.

✓ I usually prefer buildings in other countries because the scenery and architecture are often very different from what I see at home.

Multiple word choice and quantifier errors: 'bills' is incorrect; should be 'buildings'. 'Other country' needs plural or article—use 'other countries' for general preference. 'Architects' (people) is wrong; 'architecture' (style) is intended. Suggestion: use correct nouns for meaning and make number agreement consistent.

× For example, when I visited Venice in Italy, I enjoyed walking around the canals and admiring the unique building and atmosphere.

✓ For example, when I visited Venice in Italy, I enjoyed walking around the canals and admiring the unique buildings and atmosphere.

Plural agreement: 'building' should be 'buildings' to match 'canals' and generalize to multiple structures. Past tense 'visited' and 'enjoyed' are correct for a past event. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree in number with context.