Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (verb forms and countable/uncountable nouns), use the word “view” instead of “review”, and make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words if adding detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I work as a photographer. For example, I often search for coastal and mountain viewpoints and use my camera to capture the light at sunset, which gives my portfolio a variety of moods.

Sugestão: Be direct: state a preference or say you like both, and then give clear reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary and sentence structure, avoid repetition. Limit to up to 3 sentences and use specific contrasts (e.g., buildings vs. landscapes).

Exemplo: I enjoy both urban and rural views, but if I had to choose I prefer rural areas because they offer natural landscapes and quieter scenes. In contrast, cities interest me for architectural details and lively street life, which I also photograph occasionally.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and phrasing, be specific about why foreign views appeal to you. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details (examples or reasons). Avoid vague phrases like “that I ever searched.”

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering unfamiliar landscapes and cultural settings. For instance, I recently planned a trip to Japan to photograph its temples and countryside, which would add unique images to my portfolio.

× Yes, I really like take pictures of different reviews because I am a photographer so I really enjoy finding new review and use my camera to record that beautiful reviews.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I am a photographer, so I really enjoy finding new views and using my camera to record those beautiful views.

The verb 'like' and 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing), not the base form. 'Take' and 'use' must become 'taking' and 'using'. Also 'review' is the wrong word; 'view' fits the context. 'That beautiful reviews' has number disagreement and wrong demonstrative; use 'those beautiful views'. Improve by practicing verbs followed by -ing and checking noun forms and demonstratives.

× So the city has many buildings and the rural has many villages all over view I like.

✓ So the city has many buildings and the countryside has many villages all over, which I like.

The phrase 'rural' should be a noun or modifier; use 'the countryside' or 'rural areas'. 'All over view I like' is ungrammatical; use a relative clause 'which I like' and add a comma. 'All over' was unnecessary. To improve, choose correct nouns for place words and use relative clauses to connect ideas.

× So the city has many buildings and the rural has many villages all over view I like.

✓ So the city has many buildings and the countryside has many villages all over, which I like.

The original uses 'rural' (adjective) and 'view' (singular) where plural 'villages' and 'views' or a collective noun is needed. Using 'countryside' and 'villages' matches number. Ensure nouns agree in number and use appropriate forms (singular/plural).

× Oh I think it's hard to answer because I think I enjoy taking pictures of all of reviews.

✓ Oh, I think it's hard to answer because I enjoy taking pictures of all kinds of views.

'Taking' is correct gerund but 'all of reviews' is incorrect: use 'all kinds of views' or 'all the views'. Also remove the redundant 'I think'. To improve, avoid repeating 'I think' and use proper noun phrases like 'all kinds of'.

× I prefer views another country because I am a person that I don't like always stay in same place.

✓ I prefer views in another country because I am a person who doesn't like to always stay in the same place.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'another country'. Use 'who' for people not 'that'. 'Don't like always stay' needs 'doesn't like to always stay' or 'doesn't like staying'. Also add 'the' before 'same place'. Improve by checking preposition usage and relative pronouns.

× I prefer views another country because I am a person that I don't like always stay in same place.

✓ I prefer views in another country because I am a person who doesn't like to always stay in the same place.

Use 'who' as the relative pronoun for people, not 'that'. Also adjust verb form and articles. Practice choosing correct relative pronouns and proper article use.

× I really want to visit other countries that I ever searched because I want to use my camera to capture a different scenery.

✓ I really want to visit other countries that I have seen in my research because I want to use my camera to capture different scenery.

'That I ever searched' is unnatural; use present perfect 'have seen' and specify 'in my research' or 'that I have looked up'. 'Capture a different scenery' should be 'capture different scenery' or 'capture a different scene'—'scenery' is uncountable, so omit 'a'. Also 'want to use' is fine but could be 'to capture different scenery' for concision.

× I really want to visit other countries that I ever searched because I want to use my camera to capture a different scenery.

✓ I really want to visit other countries that I have seen in my research because I want to use my camera to capture different scenery.

The original uses 'ever searched' which incorrectly uses past tense/simple form for an unspecified past experience; present perfect 'have seen' is appropriate for experiences relevant to the present. Use correct tense for actions with present relevance.

× Yes, I really like take pictures of different reviews because I am a photographer so I really enjoy finding new review and use my camera to record that beautiful reviews.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different views because I am a photographer, so I really enjoy finding new views and using my camera to record those beautiful views.

Articles and demonstratives were incorrect: 'new review' should be 'new views' (plural) and 'that beautiful reviews' should be 'those beautiful views'. Also add commas for clarity. Practice matching articles/demonstratives to singular/plural nouns.