Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng: tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (thời thì, danh từ số nhiều/số ít). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tiếp đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh, mục đích chụp) và kết bằng một câu ngắn gọn. Luyện phát âm những từ thường bị nuốt âm (ví dụ "remember", "visited") và sắp xếp câu cho mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing scenery when I travel. I usually take pictures of landscapes and historic buildings so I can remember the places I’ve been. I also share my favorite shots on social media to keep in touch with friends.

Sugestão: Cải thiện từ vựng chính xác và liên kết ý: dùng từ đúng (ví dụ "prefer" not "refer"; "skyscrapers" not "skycraft"). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi nêu 2 lý do cụ thể, dùng liên từ (because, and, moreover) để kết nối. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ và số nhiều/số ít.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I’m attracted to skyscrapers and the lively city atmosphere. Cities offer a wide range of restaurants and cultural events, which makes them more exciting to photograph.

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và ngữ pháp: sửa lỗi dùng từ (use "prefer" not "refer"), thì động từ ("never been" → "have never been"), và lược bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng. Nên nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng, kèm 1–2 ví dụ cụ thể và lý do vì sao những nơi trong nước hấp dẫn hơn.

Exemplo: I prefer landscapes in my own country because there are many places I have never visited. For example, I enjoy exploring remote mountain villages and cultural areas, which feel very different from the cities I know and offer unique photo opportunities.

× Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful scenery when I when whenever I travel because it helped me remember the places and the most men that I visited and I also shared on social media with my friends and for me I think it is a fun hobby.

✓ Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel because it helps me remember the places and the moments that I visited, and I also share them on social media with my friends. For me, I think it is a fun hobby.

Sử dụng thời hiện tại đơn để nói về thói quen: 'whenever I travel' requires present simple 'helps' not past 'helped'. 'the most men' là lỗi nghe-sai; nên là 'the moments'. Hành động chia sẻ là thói quen nên dùng 'share' thay vì 'shared'. Thêm 'them' để đại diện cho 'pictures'. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions, check unclear words (moments), and include pronouns like 'them' for clarity.

× Well to be honest, I refer urban area to rural ones because I'm attracted to be impressive skycraft and private city life.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer urban areas to rural ones because I'm attracted to impressive skyscrapers and the private city life.

'refer' is incorrect; should be 'prefer' (verb choice). 'urban area' needs plural 'urban areas' to match 'rural ones'. Preposition 'to' used with 'prefer A to B'. 'attracted to' requires noun objects; 'be impressive skycraft' is ungrammatical and 'skycraft' is wrong word — use 'skyscrapers'. Add 'the' before 'private city life' for naturalness. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', pluralize countable nouns, and use correct noun forms (skyscrapers).

× I enjoy the variety of restaurant and cultural events which make them city more exciting for me.

✓ I enjoy the variety of restaurants and cultural events which make the city more exciting for me.

'variety of' should be followed by plural noun 'restaurants' not singular 'restaurant'. 'them city' is incorrect; should be 'the city'. Suggestion: After 'variety of' use plural nouns, and use 'the' for a specific city reference.

× Well, I refer the landscape in my own country because there are many places I never been to and I like to be and I like to explore the scenery and in, in culture, for example, some remote mountain village and cultural area that, uh, are as fascinating and very different from the city I know.

✓ Well, I prefer the landscapes in my own country because there are many places I have never been to and I like to explore the scenery and its culture. For example, some remote mountain villages and cultural areas are fascinating and very different from the cities I know.

Use 'prefer' not 'refer'. 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' when speaking generally. 'I never been to' is missing auxiliary 'have' for present perfect: 'I have never been to'. Remove redundant 'I like to be'. 'in, in culture' should be 'and its culture'. Use plural forms 'villages' and 'areas' to match 'some'. 'the city I know' should be plural 'the cities I know' to indicate multiple urban areas. Suggestion: Use present perfect for experiences up to now, pluralize general nouns, and avoid redundant phrases.