Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and use correct vocabulary. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views), then add one brief reason with a linking word (because) and a specific example. Keep to 1–3 sentences and correct word choice (use “views” or “scenes”, not “ways”).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture the atmosphere of a place. For example, I like photographing coastal sunsets and rural fields to show how light and weather change a scene.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference, use linking words correctly, and provide a specific reason and brief example. Avoid fillers (uh) and grammatical errors (use comparative form “more beautiful than”). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are more peaceful and have more natural scenery than cities. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and small farms that show seasonal colours.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct comparative grammar, and give a concise reason with a specific detail. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Say “more beautiful than” and add one supporting detail or example to make the answer natural and informative.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers diverse landscapes that I know well. For example, our mountainous region and coastal areas provide dramatic scenery that I like to photograph more than places I haven’t visited.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different ways because because views views are affected in your photos photo.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because the view affects your photos.

The sentence contains repetition ('because because', 'views views', 'photo') and article/word choice issues. Replace the repeated words, use singular 'view' with article 'the' to refer to a specific influence, and change 'are affected in your photos' to 'affects your photos' for correct subject-verb relation and clarity. Suggestion: read sentences slowly to avoid repeating words and choose the correct article ('the') when referring to a specific thing.

× I prefer uh rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

The filler 'uh' is unnecessary in written grammar corrections. The sentence is otherwise correct; remove the filler for clarity. Keep 'rural areas' plural to match 'prefer'.

× Uh, I prefer views in rural areas because rural area is very beautiful then urban areas.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas are much more beautiful than urban areas.

Errors: article and number agreement ('rural area' vs 'rural areas'), wrong comparative word ('then' should be 'than'), and missing comparative modifier. Use plural 'rural areas' to match context, verb 'are' for plural, and 'more beautiful than' or 'much more beautiful than' for correct comparison. Suggestion: use 'than' for comparisons and ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× I prefer views in my country because my country is very beautiful than other countries.

✓ I prefer views in my country because my country is much more beautiful than other countries.

Error: incorrect comparative structure ('very beautiful than' is ungrammatical). Use 'more/less ... than' for comparisons; 'very' modifies adjectives but cannot be used directly with 'than'. Also add 'much' or 'a lot' if emphasizing. Maintain article omission before 'other countries'.

× My country is an essential is very beautiful this region.

✓ My country is very beautiful; this region is especially so.

The original is ungrammatical and has redundant elements ('is an essential is'). Fix sentence structure by separating ideas: state that the country is very beautiful and clarify the region. Use 'especially so' or 'is especially beautiful' to indicate emphasis. Suggestion: form one clear idea per clause and avoid inserting unrelated words.

× I prefer views in our my country.

✓ I prefer views in my country.

The phrase 'our my country' mixes possessive pronouns. Choose one ('my country' or 'our country') depending on speaker perspective. Here 'my' is appropriate as earlier used. Ensure only one possessive pronoun is used.