Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like "baby moments" and "any kind of stuff." Use linking words (for example, "because" or "for example") to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I'm very fond of nature. For example, I often photograph flowers and landscapes when I go hiking, and I also capture candid moments of people enjoying the outdoors.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary and be clear about preference. Use one clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid contradictory words (saying urban is more natural) and unclear grammar. Replace vague phrases with concrete details.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because they feel more peaceful and natural. For example, in the countryside I can see wide fields, colorful flowers and clear skies, whereas city views often have buildings and traffic that block the scenery.

Sugestão: Make your reason concise and accurate. Start with a direct statement of preference, then give two specific supporting points (landscape and culture). Fix grammar and factual phrasing (e.g., "the world's highest mountain"). Use linking words such as "because" and "for example."

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has spectacular landscapes like the world's highest mountain, Mount Everest. Additionally, the local villages and cultural scenes add unique colors and traditions that you don't find elsewhere.

× Yes, I absolutely like taking pictures of different scenarios because I'm very fond of nature and taking pictures with different kind of baby moments or any kind of stuff.

✓ Yes, I absolutely like taking pictures of different scenes because I'm very fond of nature and of capturing different kinds of baby moments or other things.

The student used 'different scenarios' and 'different kind of baby moments' awkwardly. Use 'scenes' for views and 'kinds' plural after 'different'. Also use 'of capturing' to parallel 'fond of nature' and 'of capturing' rather than repeating 'taking pictures'. Replace informal 'stuff' with 'things'. Suggestions: use parallel structures and correct noun forms ('scene' -> 'scenes', 'kind' -> 'kinds').

× I guess I will prefer abuse in the urban areas because it is more natural instead of artificial kind of things in the urban areas.

✓ I guess I prefer views in urban areas because they can be more natural than artificial things in cities.

The original has wrong word 'abuse' and awkward phrasing. Use 'prefer' without 'will' for habitual preference. Use plural 'views' and match pronoun 'they'. Replace 'the urban areas' repetition with 'cities' and 'more natural than' for comparison. Suggestions: choose correct vocabulary and keep consistent number and comparison structure.

× There the scenes, every colors is blend through the sky, the flowers, everything is just perfect.

✓ There, the scenes and the colors are blended across the sky and the flowers; everything is just perfect.

Errors: 'every colors' mixes singular determiner 'every' with plural 'colors' and 'is blend' is incorrect verb form and agreement. Use 'the colors are blended' or 'colors blend'. Also add conjunction to join 'scenes' and 'colors'. Suggestions: ensure noun and determiner agreement ('every' + singular) and correct verb agreement and passive or active form.

× As I'm living in Nepal, I definitely prefer you in my country is because the world most highest Mount Everest is also present in my country Nepal and there are different kinds of with these people living around in my countries.

✓ As I live in Nepal, I definitely prefer my country because the world's highest mountain, Mount Everest, is also here, and there are many different kinds of people living in Nepal.

Multiple issues: 'I'm living' can be simplified to 'I live' for a general fact. 'I definitely prefer you in my country' is incorrect pronoun and structure; use 'I prefer my country'. 'world most highest' is wrong superlative order; use 'world's highest'. 'present in my country Nepal' is redundant; simplify. 'different kinds of with these people living around in my countries' is ungrammatical; correct to 'many different kinds of people living in Nepal'. Suggestions: use correct possessive for superlative, correct pronouns, simplify redundant phrases, and ensure noun phrases are complete.

× Each and everything is just beautiful.

✓ Everything is simply beautiful.

'Each and everything' is redundant and stylistically awkward. 'Simply' is a clearer adverb. Suggestions: prefer concise expressions; use 'everything' rather than 'each and everything' for natural English.