Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Shorten and clarify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid overly poetic or unclear phrases, and add one specific example. Use linking words if you add a detail. Also correct grammar (plural forms and articles) and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often stop to photograph sunsets at the lake because the colors and reflections look amazing, so I try to capture them quickly before they change.

Sugestão: Give a direct preference sentence, then support it with a specific reason using a linking word (because, since, or as). Fix grammar and avoid vague expressions like 'the area is sure'. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more natural. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling fields and forests since they offer peaceful scenes and interesting textures.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and avoid repetition. State your preference, give one specific reason with a linking word, and correct grammar (e.g., 'top eight mountains', 'fresh air'). Keep it concise and include a brief example or result.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because we have many spectacular mountains. For example, the eight major peaks near my hometown offer fresh air and great hiking trails, so I can take dramatic landscape photos close to home.

× As I love to take pictures of different view because I cannot control myself when I see a beautiful and wonderful view of the nature which is free gifted from the gods.

✓ As I love to take pictures of different views because I cannot control myself when I see a beautiful and wonderful view of nature which is freely given by the gods.

The sentence uses incorrect articles and count forms. 'Different view' should be plural 'different views' (plural issue, ID 1). 'The nature' is incorrect; we usually say 'nature' without the definite article (article error, ID 22). 'Free gifted' is ungrammatical; use 'freely given' (past participle usage and adverb, fits IDs 9 and 13). Suggestion: use 'different views' and 'view of nature' and express gift as 'freely given' to be natural and grammatical.

× I prefer few in rural areas although the the area is sure but the there is a so natural beauty that we can see from our eye.

✓ I prefer rural areas because the area is quiet and there is so much natural beauty that we can see with our eyes.

Multiple errors: 'I prefer few in rural areas' is incorrect; likely meant 'I prefer rural areas' (singular/plural misuse, ID 1). 'the the' and 'the there is' are typos/redundancies (sentence structure, ID 26). 'sure' is wrong choice; 'quiet' or 'peaceful' fits meaning (incorrect use of adjectives, ID 13). 'a so natural beauty' should be 'so much natural beauty' (quantifier error, ID 14). 'from our eye' should be 'with our eyes' (preposition and plural noun, IDs 11 and 1). Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer rural areas because the area is quiet and there is so much natural beauty we can see with our eyes.'

× I prefer views in my own country because in my country there are top 8 mountain in my country they are so beautiful that we can get fresh yours and feel the nature.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because there are eight top mountains there; they are so beautiful that we can get fresh air and feel close to nature.

Errors include number and article forms: 'top 8 mountain' should be 'eight top mountains' (plural and number placement, ID 1). Repetition 'in my country' is redundant (sentence structure, ID 26). 'get fresh yours' is wrong word choice and form; should be 'get fresh air' (incorrect use of pronoun/word, IDs 12 and 13). 'feel the nature' is better as 'feel close to nature' or 'experience nature' (preposition/article usage, IDs 11 and 22). Suggestion: reorder as 'there are eight top mountains there' and use 'fresh air' and 'feel close to nature' for clarity.