Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Use correct grammar for verbs and countable/uncountable forms, and avoid repetition. Aim for no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I generally don't like taking pictures of views because I'm not comfortable using my phone camera. For example, when I visit a new place I get confused by the settings and end up missing good shots. Because of this, I usually ask someone else to take photos or focus on enjoying the moment instead.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons connected with linking words (e.g., because, therefore). Reduce hesitation sounds and repetition. Use correct article and preposition forms (e.g., 'the countryside', 'in urban areas'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in the countryside because of the natural scenery and the peaceful lifestyle. For example, there are more trees and open fields which help me relax, whereas urban areas are often noisy and crowded.

Sugestão: Structure your answer by contrasting the two options clearly with linking words (e.g., 'On the one hand... On the other hand...'). Be specific about examples and correct grammar (avoid 'which which', use 'I haven't visited' or 'I haven't been to'). Keep it concise: 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: On the one hand, I prefer natural views in my own country because we have many rivers and mountains that I haven't visited yet. On the other hand, for modern and futuristic cityscapes I would prefer other countries, since they often have more advanced architecture and technology displays.

× Well honestly I don't like to taking pictures because I have no idea I haven't.

✓ Well honestly I don't like taking pictures because I don't know how to.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'taking', not the infinitive with 'to taking' (error type 8). Also 'I have no idea I haven't' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I don't know how to' to convey inability. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' and express inability with 'don't know how to'.

× I have no command to use a mobile phone so that's why I'm a bit confused while taking a picture, especially when when we visit some some new area.

✓ I am not skilled at using a mobile phone, so I get a bit confused when taking pictures, especially when we visit a new area.

The phrase 'I have no command to use a mobile phone' is incorrect usage of expression and pronouns/phrasing (type 12). Replace with 'I am not skilled at using' or 'I don't know how to use'. Also remove repeated words 'when when' and 'some some' and adjust verb tense and article 'a new area'. Suggestion: use clear subject + adjective/phrase to describe ability and remove repetitions.

× So it's very challenging for me.

✓ So it is very challenging for me.

This sentence is acceptable but contracting 'it's' is informal; keep full 'it is' if desired. The original had no major grammar error; this correction uses the expanded form for clarity (type 26).

× I love, uh, I love a countryside because of the natural environment and, uh, a quiet lifestyle.

✓ I love the countryside because of its natural environment and its quiet lifestyle.

Use of article with 'countryside' requires 'the' (type 17/22), and possessive 'its' clarifies which environment and lifestyle. Repetition 'I love, uh, I love' removed for fluency. Suggestion: use 'the countryside' and 'its'.

× This all things are quite difficult in, in quite difficult in urban areas.

✓ All these things are quite difficult in urban areas.

'This all things' is incorrect word order and demonstrative use; use 'All these things' (type 13). Remove duplication 'in, in' and redundant 'quite difficult in'. Suggestion: place demonstrative and quantifier before noun: 'all these things'.

× That's why that's the reason I love to stay and views in countryside area.

✓ That's why I prefer to live and see views in the countryside.

Problems: redundant 'that's why that's the reason' (type 16/26), incorrect verb 'stay and views' should be 'live and see/view' and missing articles before 'countryside area' (type 11/17). Use 'the countryside' and verbs 'prefer to live' and 'see views' or 'enjoy the views'.

× Well, if I talk about a natural and natural view, so definitely it's my country because of we have several rivers and mountains which which are not visited by my own self.

✓ Well, if I talk about natural views, then definitely my country, because we have several rivers and mountains that I have not visited myself.

Remove repetition 'a natural and natural view' and awkward filler 'so definitely it's my country because of we have' (type 26). Use 'natural views' (plural) and 'then definitely my country'. Replace 'which which are not visited by my own self' with 'that I have not visited myself' to use correct relative clause, past participle and reflexive pronoun (types 9,15). Suggestion: simplify and use 'I have not visited myself'.

× But if I talk about the technology and the futuristic area, so definitely the other country.

✓ But if I talk about technology and futuristic areas, then definitely other countries.

The original has article and number errors: 'the technology and the futuristic area' is awkward; use uncountable 'technology' and plural 'futuristic areas' or 'other countries' (type 6/22). Also add 'then' for clarity. Suggestion: use general nouns without 'the' when speaking generally and match plural/singular consistently.