Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (singular/plural, word order) and use linking words if you add details. For example, say you enjoy photographing places because of unique features and mention a specific memory or example to make the answer natural and informative.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I visit historic palaces. For example, last year I photographed the ornate ceilings and gardens of the Summer Palace, and those photos remind me of the textures and colors I saw there.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific, well-structured reasons using linking words (e.g., because, and, so). Fix grammar (infinitive after 'like', plural forms) and avoid repetition. Mention one concrete example to support your reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy shopping and the cityscape. For instance, cities have tall modern buildings and many shopping streets, so it’s easy to combine sightseeing with practical activities like taking public transport.

Sugestão: Give a direct statement of preference then provide specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repeating phrases and make grammar corrections (e.g., 'I prefer views in my own country' not 'I prefer I prefer'). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' to introduce examples and be specific about what you like.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, China has coastal beaches, vast deserts and dramatic mountain ranges, so I can experience many different settings without traveling far.

× Yes, of course I like taking pictures in different views in different palaces.

✓ Yes, of course I like taking pictures of different views in different places.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'views' and 'palaces' is likely a mistranslation; use 'of' with 'pictures' (pictures of something). Also 'palaces' should be 'places' to match intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'take pictures of' and choose the correct noun 'places'.

× This is different memory I have.

✓ These are different memories I have.

Subject and noun form are incorrect. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' to agree with 'different', and the demonstrative should be 'These' to match plural noun. Also word order 'I have' after the noun is acceptable but clearer as 'I have' at end. Suggestion: use plural forms and matching demonstratives.

× I prefer urban areas because I like go shopping and in urban areas there are many shopping and high buildings and have more convenience Tran transport transport.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like to go shopping; urban areas have many shops and tall buildings and more convenient transport.

Multiple errors: infinitive missing ('to go shopping'), incorrect noun form 'shopping' vs 'shops', repetition and misspelling 'Tran transport transport', and awkward structure 'and have more convenience'. Pronoun issue arises from omitted subjects in clauses; use 'urban areas have'. Suggestion: use 'like to do', plural noun 'shops', 'tall buildings', and 'convenient transport'.

× I prefer I prefer views in my country such as China has the different views, ocean, desert and so on.

✓ I prefer views in my country; China has different landscapes such as oceans, deserts, and so on.

Redundant phrase 'I prefer I prefer' and awkward clause 'such as China has the different views'. Also noun forms: 'ocean, desert' should be plural or 'the ocean and the desert' depending on meaning. Suggestion: remove redundancy, restructure sentence and use plural nouns or articles for clarity.