Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct repetition/grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeated words, and add one specific detail (where/when you take photos). Use linking phrase if adding detail. Also limit to 3–4 sentences and correct tense (used to implies past).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I often photograph landscapes when I travel so I can revisit the feeling of being there later. For example, I take pictures at sunrise on beach trips because the light and colors are unforgettable.

Sugestão: Good content and clear preference, but reduce filler words (uh, oh well) and repeated phrases. Use one linking word to connect reasons (for example, 'because' and 'moreover'), and add a specific example or comparison to strengthen answer. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views of rural villages because they are quieter and have less traffic. Moreover, rural areas offer more green space and fresh air, which helps me relax. For example, I enjoy walking by rice fields in my hometown to unwind.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'other countries' not 'the other country'; avoid 'everything is polluted'). Give one concise reason with a specific example of a place and finish the sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because some places, like Canada and Australia, often have cleaner air and clearer skies. For example, I visited Vancouver and was impressed by the visibility of distant mountains, which is rare in my city due to air pollution.

× Well yes, I'm a person who used to to take pictures as a memory so that I can I can have the same feeling while remembering that What a beautiful view I have seen.

✓ Well, yes. I'm someone who used to take pictures to remember the feeling of seeing a beautiful view.

Problems: repeated words ('to to', 'I can I can'), inconsistent clause structure and unnecessary capitalization. Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 26 (Sentence structure errors). Remove duplicate words, simplify purpose clause: 'used to take pictures to remember...' Use 'someone' for natural phrasing and place modifiers ('to remember the feeling...') correctly. Keep tense 'used to' for past habit and simple present for general statement.

× Oh well, I love I prefer more the views of the rural villages because it is away from traffic jam and uh, noise pollution.

✓ Oh well, I prefer the views of rural villages because they are away from traffic and noise pollution.

This displays repeated phrase ('I love I prefer more') and incorrect preposition/number agreement. Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 1/27 (singular/plural and subject-verb agreement). Use 'prefer' alone, 'rural villages' plural with pronoun 'they', and 'away from traffic and noise pollution' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also remove filler words.

× Moreover, it has more green space rather than urban areas.

✓ Moreover, they have more green space than urban areas.

Original uses singular 'it' for plural 'villages' and incorrect comparative 'rather than' after 'more'. Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). Use plural subject 'they' and correct comparative structure 'more ... than ...'.

× So I definitely love the views of rural areas where I can relax and have a stress free time.

✓ So I definitely love the views of rural areas where I can relax and have a stress-free time.

Missing hyphen in compound adjective 'stress-free' and overall sentence structure is acceptable. Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 22 (Article errors) partly and 26 (Sentence structure errors). Add hyphen to form correct compound adjective; 'a stress-free time' is fine.

× Well, I prefer the views of the other country because in my country like India, there is a lot of pollution and everything is polluted.

✓ Well, I prefer the views of other countries because in my country, India, there is a lot of pollution and many places are polluted.

Use of 'the other country' is incorrect when speaking generally; should be 'other countries'. 'in my country like India' is awkward—better 'in my country, India,'. 'everything is polluted' is too absolute; use 'many places are polluted'. Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns) and 22 (Article errors).

× So the views are not that much clear.

✓ So the views are not very clear.

'Not that much clear' is unidiomatic; use 'not very clear'. Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Use adverb 'very' to modify adjective 'clear'.

× So I like to visor to see the views of the countries like Canada and Australia where there is no pollution and the sky is so clear and.

✓ So I like to visit countries like Canada and Australia, where there is little pollution and the sky is very clear.

'visor' is incorrect word; should be 'visit'. 'the countries' -> 'countries like'; 'no pollution' is exaggerated, better 'little pollution'. Sentence was incomplete ending with 'and.' Matches Grammar Problem Type ID 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Use 'visit' verb and complete the sentence with proper comparative adverb 'very'.