Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but could be improved by adding one brief specific example and a linking phrase to enrich content without redundancy. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid overgeneral phrases like "beautiful scenarios."

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing coastal sunsets when I travel because the changing light creates dramatic colours and reflections, which I later use in a travel photo album.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is repetitive and contains an unclear phrase (‘I'm more modern than the rural areas’) that affects clarity. Remove unnecessary repetition, use a linking word, and give one specific reason or brief example (e.g., skyline lights, architecture). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy city skylines, especially at night when the lights create a striking contrast. For example, I like photographing rooftop panoramas where you can see illuminated buildings and busy streets below.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and specific (mountain mornings), but the sentence structure and repetition of "clear" could be tightened. Use a linking word to add a concise reason and avoid comparing vaguely to ‘other countries.’ Add a short concrete detail (e.g., colour, atmosphere) to strengthen the image.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, Nepal, because I love the clear morning views of the Himalayas. For instance, at sunrise the peaks glow pink and the air is crisp, which makes for stunning photographs.

× I prefer urban areas because I like modern cities and I like the night views of the city from the top of the buildings, and I'm more modern than the rural areas. Thank you.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I like modern cities and I like the night views of the city from the tops of buildings, and I am more interested in modern life than in rural areas. Thank you.

The phrase 'more modern than the rural areas' is incorrect in meaning and adjective use. 'Modern' describes a thing, not a preference; the student likely means 'more interested in modern life.' Also 'the top of the buildings' is awkward; use 'tops of buildings' or 'the top of a building.' Suggestion: replace comparative adjective with a clear verb phrase ('more interested in') and use plural 'tops of buildings' for natural English.

× I prefer views in my own country because my country is Nepal and I like the view of the mountains in the morning. Morning the mountains are very clear and the weather here is very clear rather than other countries. Thank you.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my country is Nepal and I like the view of the mountains in the morning. In the morning the mountains are very clear and the weather here is clearer than in other countries. Thank you.

Several sentence structure and comparison problems: 'Morning the mountains are very clear' lacks the preposition 'In' and natural word order. 'The weather here is very clear rather than other countries' uses 'rather than' incorrectly for comparison and repeats 'clear' awkwardly. Use 'clearer than in other countries' for correct comparative structure and include 'in' before 'other countries.' Also separate ideas into clearer sentences.