Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần rút ngắn và mạch lạc hơn; tránh lặp từ và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác (ví dụ: "later in the future or sometime" không cần thiết, nên dùng thì và cấu trúc ngắn gọn). Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể làm bằng chứng, và kết luận ngắn gọn. Lưu ý ngữ pháp (articles, plural) và nối ý hợp lý.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes. I find it a wonderful way to capture memories with friends or family, and years later I can look at the photos and recall how the place felt. For example, a seaside sunset I photographed last year always reminds me of that trip.

Sugestão: Ý được truyền đạt nhưng cấu trúc câu rườm rà và một số lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'modern architectures' nên là 'modern architecture'; 'the lively' không hoàn chỉnh). Cần dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, theo sau bằng 1–2 lý do cụ thể và ví dụ, sử dụng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'for example' để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the energetic atmosphere and modern architecture in cities. For example, tall glass buildings and busy streets make a cityscape feel exciting and full of life.

Sugestão: Ý tốt nhưng câu quá dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'to those in other country' → 'to those in other countries'; 'grand landscape' → 'grand landscapes'; 'haven't a chance' → 'haven't had the chance'). Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và kết thúc bằng một ví dụ ngắn hoặc kế hoạch trong tương lai. Chú ý chia thì và danh từ số nhiều.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my country, Vietnam, because it offers many diverse and stunning landscapes I haven't visited yet. For instance, I hope to explore Ha Giang's mountain scenery next year because of its dramatic peaks and winding roads.

× Yes, definitely. I'd really love taking pictures of some landscape because I think it's a great way to capture memories with the people I'm with, and later in the future or sometime I can look back and remember how that place and that people felt.

✓ Yes, definitely. I'd really love to take pictures of some landscapes because I think it's a great way to capture memories with the people I'm with, and later I can look back and remember how that place and those people felt.

The verb following 'would like' (I'd really love) should use the base form 'to take' rather than the gerund 'taking' in this context. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match the general meaning. 'Later in the future or sometime' is redundant; 'later' suffices. 'That people' is incorrect; use 'those people' to refer to plural people. Suggestions: use infinitive after 'would love' (I'd love to do), use plural nouns for general references, avoid redundant time phrases, and use 'those' for plural demonstratives.

× Well, I think I prefer views in cities to rural areas because I enjoy the energetic atmosphere which is in the cities and expressed by modern architectures or the lively.

✓ Well, I think I prefer views in cities to rural areas because I enjoy the energetic atmosphere in cities, expressed by modern architecture and lively streets.

'Which is in the cities' is wordy and awkward; use 'in cities' directly. 'Architectures' is incorrect; 'architecture' is an uncountable noun. 'Or the lively' is incomplete; a noun is needed after 'lively' (for example, 'lively streets'). Suggestions: simplify relative clauses, use uncountable form 'architecture', and ensure adjectives like 'lively' modify a noun.

× Definitely I prefer views in Vietnam to those in other country because there are many beautiful and grand landscape that I even haven't a chance to visit there and I really want to go to visit in the future.

✓ Definitely I prefer views in Vietnam to those in other countries because there are many beautiful and grand landscapes that I even haven't had a chance to visit, and I really want to visit them in the future.

'Other country' should be plural 'other countries' to match 'those'. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to agree with 'many'. The clause 'I even haven't a chance' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'I haven't had a chance'. 'Visit there' is redundant when 'visit them' (referring to landscapes) or simply 'visit' is sufficient. Suggestions: match singular/plural forms, use present perfect 'haven't had' for experience up to now, and avoid redundant locatives.