Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần nói rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh tiếng lấp đầy (uh, umm) và sửa ngữ pháp (singular/plural, word order). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng 1-2 câu hỗ trợ với từ nối (for example, because) và chi tiết cụ thể (kể tên địa điểm hoặc cảm xúc cụ thể). Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes. For example, I like taking photos of the ocean because its calm surface makes me feel peaceful and relaxed. I also enjoy wide shots of mountains because their scale and texture create a dramatic scene.

Sugestão: Cần phát âm rõ ràng, tránh lỗi từ (prefer/prelude) và lặp từ. Trả lời trực tiếp, rồi giải thích với ví dụ hoặc so sánh được liên kết bằng từ nối (because, while). Sử dụng một hoặc hai tính từ phù hợp và cụ thể hơn (e.g. peaceful, vibrant, crowded, noisy).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they feel peaceful and the air is much fresher. While urban views are vibrant and full of life, I usually enjoy the quiet and open spaces of the countryside.

Sugestão: Cần tổ chức câu rõ: nói trực tiếp sở thích, rồi nêu lý do cụ thể cho từng lựa chọn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp (pluralization, adverb/adjective use) và filler. Dùng từ nối (for me, however, because) và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể (a place or activity).

Exemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad. Views at home make me feel safe and free because they are familiar, for example the wide river valleys near my town. However, views in other countries feel fresh and exciting because they offer new landscapes and cultures to explore.

× I like taking pictures of different views like the mountain and the uh, the oceans.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, like mountains and the ocean.

Mistake: mix of singular and plural and unnecessary definite article. Use plural 'mountains' when speaking generally; use 'the ocean' (singular) or 'oceans' consistently. Suggestion: decide whether you mean all mountains (use plural) or a specific mountain (use 'the'). Use commas to separate clauses.

× The ocean will make me feel peaceful umm, why uh, wider picture of mountains uh, make me feel umm.

✓ The ocean makes me feel peaceful, while wide views of mountains make me feel relaxed.

Mistake: awkward structure and incorrect word 'wider' used as noun phrase; inconsistent tense and unclear conjunction. Use simple present 'makes' for general feelings and 'while' to contrast. Replace 'wider picture of mountains' with 'wide views of mountains' and 'feel umm' with specific adjective like 'relaxed' or 'calm'.

× To be honest, I prefuse UH in rural areas, the rural areas make me feel peaceful and the fresh uh, the air is very very fresh, very fresh rare, while urban areas UMM is very vibrant.

✓ To be honest, I prefer rural areas; they make me feel peaceful, and the air is very fresh, while urban areas are very vibrant.

Mistake: 'prefuse' is mispronunciation of 'prefer' and unnecessary preposition 'in'. Also incorrect pronoun and verb agreement: 'urban areas is' should be 'urban areas are'. Remove duplicated 'the' before 'air' and odd word 'rare'. Use semicolon or comma to join related clauses.

× To be honest, I like about the view in my country and in other countries.

✓ To be honest, I like the views in my country and in other countries.

Mistake: incorrect use of 'like about' — use 'like' without 'about' when stating preference. Also 'view' should be plural 'views' when speaking generally. Use definite article 'the' before 'views' to indicate specific concept.

× The view in my own countries make me feel free, freely and safe, uh, safe, uh, wide, uh, in the in other countries make me feel umm, fun and new.

✓ The views in my own country make me feel free and safe, while the views in other countries make me feel excited and curious.

Mistake: 'own countries' conflicts with singular/plural; choose 'country' singular with 'my own country' or plural with 'my own countries'. Subject-verb agreement: 'views ... make' is correct when subject is plural. Avoid mixing adjectives and adverbs: use 'feel free and safe' (adjectives after 'feel'). Replace vague 'wide' and 'umm' with clearer adjectives like 'excited' and 'curious'.