Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and directly answer the question first, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (e.g. "available in every person life" -> "available to everyone") and avoid repetition ("mind stress of our mind"). Use linking words (e.g. "also", "for example") to connect ideas. Limit to 3–4 clear sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often use my smartphone to capture landscapes because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I like photographing sunsets and parks and then saving my favorite shots on my phone.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference (urban or rural). Fix grammar and pronunciation errors, use linking words ("however", "also", "because") and give one specific reason or example (e.g. "fields, parks, sunsets"). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer wide fields and peaceful parks. For example, the sunsets in my village are very colorful and calm, which I enjoy photographing. Urban scenery can be interesting too, but I find rural views more relaxing.

Sugestão: Answer directly (either prefer own country or other countries) and give clear reasons with specific examples. Correct grammar ("I'm leaving to Canada" -> "I live in Canada" or "I've been to Canada"). Use linking phrases ("for example", "because") and avoid fillers like "uh". Keep to 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because I have lived in Canada and enjoyed its scenery. For example, Canada has dramatic mountains, large lakes, and landmarks like the CN Tower that offer diverse photo opportunities. India also has beautiful views, but I find Canadian landscapes more striking for photography.

× Well, due to advancement of the technology, mobile phone is available in every person life.

✓ Well, due to the advancement of technology, mobile phones are available in every person's life.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'advancement' and unnecessary 'the' before 'technology'; 'mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' to match general statement (singular/plural), and 'every person life' needs possessive 'person's' and 'life' singular. Use plural for general availability and possessive form for 'every person'. Suggestion: Use 'the advancement of technology' and 'mobile phones are available in every person's life'.

× So taking a picture is a good thing and it helps us to reduce the mind stress of our mind.

✓ So taking pictures is a good thing and it helps us reduce stress.

Subject-verb agreement and redundancy: 'taking a picture' generalised should be plural 'taking pictures'; 'reduce the mind stress of our mind' is redundant and awkward — use 'reduce stress'. Also omit unnecessary 'to' after 'helps us'. Suggestion: Say 'taking pictures... helps us reduce stress'.

× So whenever I have free time, I love to take the pictures of different view in so that I can uh save it in my phone.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I love to take pictures of different views so that I can save them on my phone.

Awkward sentence structure and article/plural errors: remove extra 'the', use plural 'pictures' and 'views', 'in' before 'so that' is wrong, use 'so that' directly, 'it' should be 'them' to match plural, and use 'on my phone' for correct preposition. Suggestion: 'Whenever I have free time, I love to take pictures of different views so that I can save them on my phone.'

× Well, most of the people believes that urban area has a most better views butter as I belongs to a rural area so it has lots of fields and parks in my area.

✓ Well, most people believe that urban areas have better views, but as I belong to a rural area, it has lots of fields and parks.

Multiple agreement and word choice errors: 'most of the people believes' should be 'most people believe' (plural subject with plural verb); 'urban area has a most better views' should be 'urban areas have better views' (remove 'most' and 'better' redundancy, match plural); 'butter' is mispronounced 'but'; 'I belongs' should be 'I belong'. Also omitted commas. Suggestion: 'Most people believe that urban areas have better views, but I belong to a rural area, which has lots of fields and parks.'

× So I love to take the pictures of that.

✓ So I love to take pictures of them.

Awkward demonstrative and article use: 'the pictures of that' is unnatural. Use plural 'pictures' and refer back with 'them'. Suggestion: 'I love to take pictures of them.'

× Apart from it, the sunset view of my rural area is also very good as compared to the city.

✓ Also, the sunset in my rural area is much more beautiful compared to the city.

Comparative phrasing awkward: 'the sunset view of my rural area is also very good as compared to the city' is wordy. Use 'the sunset in my rural area is much more beautiful compared to the city' or 'is better than in the city.' Suggestion: 'The sunset in my rural area is more beautiful than in the city.'

× Oh, well, it is a very difficult to find out the difference, but as I'm leaving to Canada, so I think that Canada is better as compared to India as compared to in the view.

✓ Oh, well, it is very difficult to find a difference, but since I live in Canada, I think Canada is better than India in terms of views.

Multiple structure and tense errors: 'a very difficult' needs noun 'to find a difference' or 'very difficult to tell', 'I'm leaving to Canada' is incorrect — likely intended 'I live in Canada' or 'I've moved to Canada'; 'better as compared to India as compared to in the view' is redundant and ungrammatical — use 'better than India in terms of views.' Suggestion: 'It is difficult to tell, but since I live in Canada, I think Canada has better views than India.'

× So, uh, I think that Canada has a better views like CN Tower lakes and uh, mountains.

✓ I think that Canada has better views, like the CN Tower, lakes, and mountains.

Mix of article and agreement errors: 'a better views' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' and use 'better views'. Add definite article 'the' before 'CN Tower' and include commas between items. Suggestion: 'Canada has better views, like the CN Tower, lakes, and mountains.'