Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer to type in because I think it's easy to conserve content and also to send a message. Someone needs this information and at the same time it's quite quite inflicient and convenient since a lot of people can read it quickly.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, most of my job is to use the computer so whatever takes the computer to type and anything we need like the email documents and rebuild some powerpoints. Yeah, that's one of my jobs. So I spent plenty time on typing.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
Well, I think it is at the university because I got my first computer when I entered into the university. My parents bought it for me and used it to know how to type and how to write an email and how to form a document.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
Oh wow, I improve my typing through a specific website. I search it on the internet to improve the typing speed so you recommended a specific website that can be used to improve the non native speakers' typing speed.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答了问题,但表达不够自然,且有明显用词和语法问题。“type in”应改为“typing”或“to type”,“conserve content”不符合语境,应使用“save/store information”,“inflicient”应为“efficient”。此外,“quite quite”重复,第二句的逻辑也不清晰。建议先直接说明偏好,再用“because”给出一到两个具体原因,例如方便保存、编辑和分享。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient than handwriting. I can easily edit, save, and share my work with other people. It is also easier for others to read, especially when I need to send important information.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答基本相关,但开头“Yes”没有明确回答是使用台式电脑还是笔记本电脑。句子过长,存在不自然表达,如“most of my job is to use the computer”“whatever takes the computer to type”和“rebuild some powerpoints”。“plenty time”应改为“plenty of time”。建议先明确设备类型,再说明工作中经常打字,并列举具体任务。
Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day. I use it at work to write emails, prepare documents, and create PowerPoint presentations. Since most of my job involves using a computer, I spend several hours typing each day.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答内容清楚,也提供了时间和背景,但时态和搭配需要改进。“I think it is at the university”应改为“I think it was when I was at university”,“entered into the university”应改为“entered university”或“started university”。“used it to know how to type”不自然,应改为“used it to learn how to type”,“form a document”应改为“create/write a document”。建议使用过去时,并按“时间—原因—学习内容”的顺序组织答案。
Exemplo: I learned how to type when I started university. My parents bought me my first computer at that time, so I used it to practise typing, write emails, and create documents. Before that, I had very little experience with computers.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中提到了网站,但表达重复且句意不完整。“I improve my typing”应使用现在进行习惯表达“I improve my typing by...”,“through a specific website”过于模糊;“so you recommended...”似乎把对考官的提问误放进了答案中。建议明确说明练习方法,例如使用打字网站进行计时练习、练习准确率,并说明练习频率。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by using online typing websites. They give me timed exercises, so I can practise both my speed and accuracy. I usually practise for about fifteen minutes a few times a week, and I try to avoid looking at the keyboard.
× I prefer to type in because I think it's easy to conserve content and also to send a message.
✓ I prefer to type because I think it's easy to conserve content and also to send a message.
这里的“type”表示“打字”时通常不需要加介词“in”。“type in”一般表示“把某项信息输入进去”,后面通常需要接宾语,例如“type in a message”。
× Yes, most of my job is to use the computer so whatever takes the computer to type and anything we need like the email documents and rebuild some powerpoints.
✓ Yes, I use a computer every day for most of my work, so I use it to type and to create the email documents and PowerPoint presentations we need.
原句包含多个不完整或不合乎逻辑的结构,例如“whatever takes the computer to type”和“anything we need like”。需要明确主语、谓语和宾语,并使用平行结构“to type and to create”。
× So I spent plenty time on typing.
✓ So I spend plenty of time typing.
“plenty”后面接不可数名词“time”时,通常使用“plenty of time”,不能直接说“plenty time”。另外,“spend time doing something”比“spend time on typing”更自然。
× So I spent plenty time on typing.
✓ So I spend plenty of time typing.
前文描述的是现在的日常工作,因此应使用一般现在时“spend”,而不是一般过去时“spent”。描述习惯或经常发生的事情时,要保持一般现在时。
× Well, I think it is at the university because I got my first computer when I entered into the university.
✓ Well, I think it was at university because I got my first computer when I entered university.
问题问的是“什么时候学会打字”,回答的是过去发生的经历,所以应使用过去时“was”。“I think it was...”表示对过去事实的回忆。
× Well, I think it is at the university because I got my first computer when I entered into the university.
✓ Well, I think it was at university because I got my first computer when I entered university.
“enter”本身可以直接接地点名词,不能使用“enter into the university”表示进入大学。应说“enter university”或“enter the university”。
× My parents bought it for me and used it to know how to type and how to write an email and how to form a document.
✓ My parents bought it for me, and I used it to learn how to type, write an email, and create a document.
原句中的主语“used it”是“My parents”,但根据语境,应该是学生本人使用电脑。因此需要把主语改为“I”。“I used it”可以清楚地表达“我使用电脑”。
× I search it on the internet to improve the typing speed so you recommended a specific website that can be used to improve the non native speakers' typing speed.
✓ I search for it on the internet to improve my typing speed, so I recommend a specific website that can be used by non-native speakers to improve their typing speed.
动词“search”表示“寻找某物”时,通常使用“search for something”,所以不能说“search it”。另外,“used by non-native speakers”清楚地表示“被非英语母语者使用”。
× I search it on the internet to improve the typing speed so you recommended a specific website that can be used to improve the non native speakers' typing speed.
✓ I search for it on the internet to improve my typing speed, so I recommend a specific website that can be used by non-native speakers to improve their typing speed.
这里是在回答自己通常如何提高打字能力,且是在提出当前的建议,因此应使用一般现在时“I recommend”,而不是过去时“you recommended”。同时,主语应为“I”,因为是学生本人提出推荐。