Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Content is relevant and clear, but there are small language errors and a typo (“dears” should be “ideas”). Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences) and add one specific example to support your opinion. Use a linking phrase when giving the reason (e.g., “because” is fine, then add “for example” or “for instance”).

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it's generally quicker and more convenient than handwriting. For example, when I write emails I can quickly correct typos and reorganize paragraphs on my laptop, which saves me time.

Sugestão: The answer gives relevant information but is slightly unclear and has grammatical errors (word order, articles, and phrasing). Break into a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly and check article use (e.g., “reply to clients' emails”).

Exemplo: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work as a technician. I use it to write reports, reply to clients' emails and discuss technical issues with them.

Sugestão: Good structure: direct answer followed by supporting details. Improve accuracy of tense and phrasing (“I became” not “I become”), and replace vague linkers like “So” with more precise connectors such as “After” or “Within a few months”.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was eight because my mother bought a computer to prepare for her exams. I practiced every day with online drills and short stories, and within a few months I became noticeably faster and more confident.

Sugestão: Useful content but watch subject-verb agreement and sentence ending. Correct errors (“games that require”, “increase my speed and accuracy”, “build muscle memory”). Add one brief example of a game or practice routine to make the answer more specific.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by playing online typing games that require me to type words quickly and accurately. For example, I play a 10-minute game three times a week, which helps increase my speed and accuracy and builds muscle memory.

× It's much easier to correct mistakes or reorganize my dears on a computer, which saves time when I'm writing emails or essays.

✓ It's much easier to correct mistakes or reorganize my ideas on a computer, which saves time when I'm writing emails or essays.

The word 'dears' is incorrect in this context; the intended noun is 'ideas'. This is a word choice error rather than a grammatical inflection. Replace 'dears' with 'ideas' to convey the correct meaning. Ensure you proofread for incorrect words that sound similar to the intended word.

× Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day I work at the technician so I use my laptop to write reports, reply to clients emails and chat with them with technician issues.

✓ Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I work as a technician, so I use my laptop to write reports, reply to clients' emails, and chat with them about technical issues.

This original contains run-on sentences, incorrect noun phrase 'work at the technician', missing possessive apostrophe in 'clients emails', and awkward preposition 'with technician issues'. Break into two sentences and correct job description to 'work as a technician', make 'clients' possessive, add commas in a list, and use 'about technical issues'. These changes fix sentence structure, preposition use, and punctuation.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 8 years old because my mom bought a computer to prepare for her exams.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was eight years old because my mom bought a computer to prepare for her exams.

The original is grammatically acceptable except for the numeral '8' in formal writing and consistency; spell out small numbers in prose: 'eight'. No tense change needed; keep past tense 'learned' and 'bought'.

× So over a few months I become noticeably faster and more confident.

✓ So over a few months I became noticeably faster and more confident.

The event is described in the past; therefore the past tense 'became' should be used rather than the present 'become'. Use consistent past tense when narrating past experiences.

× I improve my typing by playing online typing games that requires me to type words on the screen as quickly and accurately as possible.

✓ I improve my typing by playing online typing games that require me to type words on the screen as quickly and accurately as possible.

The relative clause modifies the plural noun 'games', so the verb should be 'require' (not 'requires'). Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subject needs plural verb. The '-ing' form 'playing' is correct here.

× Practicing this several times a week helps increase my speed and the accuracy and build muscle memory for.

✓ Practicing this several times a week helps increase my speed and accuracy and builds muscle memory.

The original is ungrammatical: 'helps increase my speed and the accuracy and build muscle memory for' mixes forms and includes an unnecessary preposition 'for'. Use parallel structure: 'helps increase my speed and accuracy and builds muscle memory.' Match verb forms ('helps' with 'builds' or use infinitives consistently) and remove stray preposition.