Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and filler words, correct grammar (use adverb 'quickly' instead of 'fastly'), and give one specific reason with an example. Use a linking word when adding a second point.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is quicker and more convenient. For example, I can easily correct mistakes and rearrange paragraphs on a laptop, which saves time. Also, typing lets me store and search documents digitally, so I rarely lose my notes.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then add specific details. Reduce repetition and hesitations, use correct verb forms (e.g., 'I type' not 'I typing'), and finish your sentence. Mention which device you use most and why.

Exemplo: Yes, I type every day, mainly on a laptop because my job requires me to work remotely. I also use a desktop at the office for heavier tasks, but at home I prefer the laptop for its portability.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear time and avoid uncertainty. If you are unsure, give an approximate age but state it confidently. Provide a brief supporting detail about how you learned (class, self-taught) using a linking word.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about 12 years old. I took a short computer class at school and then practised at home, which helped me build speed and accuracy.

Sugestão: Be slightly more specific and use varied vocabulary. Start with a topic sentence, then give concrete examples (name a website or describe an exercise). Use linking words like 'for example' and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising online every day. For example, I use typing.com and do 15-minute drills that focus on accuracy and speed; as a result, I have reduced my errors and increased my words-per-minute.

× Actually, I prefer typing because it's, uh, easy and convenient and, uh, you can edit, uh, fastly, but in handwriting you have to, umm, pay attention a lot, uh, for, uh, writing, so.

✓ Actually, I prefer typing because it's easy and convenient, and you can edit quickly, but with handwriting you have to pay much more attention when writing.

The adverb 'fastly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'quickly' (adverb form). 'Pay attention a lot' is awkward; use 'pay much more attention'. Also 'for writing' should be 'when writing' (preposition and clause use). Improve by placing adverbs next to the verb they modify and using standard adverb forms. Grammar problem type ID:20

× Yes, of course my job is related to type a lot with laptop or a computer, so I always uh typing umm, the laptop or uh desktop keyboard uh, sometimes, uh, when I'm I'm home, I.

✓ Yes, of course my job requires a lot of typing on a laptop or computer, so I am always typing on the laptop or desktop keyboard, sometimes when I'm at home.

After 'related to' a gerund is required ('typing'), but 'related to type' is wrong. More natural phrasing is 'requires a lot of typing'. Also use 'typing' as present participle with correct auxiliary 'am' and include preposition 'on' for 'on the laptop'. Add 'at' in 'at home'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Actually, it's a thought question, but I think I was, umm, very young, uh, actually around 12 or 30 and years old. Umm, I, I've, uh, umm.

✓ Actually, it's a tough question, but I think I was very young, around 12 or 13 years old.

The sentence contains wrong words ('thought' should be 'tough') and unclear ages ('30 and years old'). Use past simple 'I was' correctly and provide a coherent age. Remove filler words and restructure to be concise. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Well, I uh, try to improve my typing by practicing everyday, uh, in some site, online site and doing short daily exercise because that helps me get faster and make uh, fewer mistakes, especially for my IELTS exam uh.

✓ Well, I try to improve my typing by practicing every day on some online sites and doing short daily exercises because that helps me get faster and make fewer mistakes, especially for my IELTS exam.

Use present simple 'try' for habitual actions. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb) — here use 'every day'. 'In some site' is incorrect preposition and count noun; use 'on some online sites'. 'Exercise' should be plural 'exercises' when referring to repeated short practices. These corrections improve grammar and fluency. Grammar problem type ID:6}]}} PMID:27.0%INVALID_IGNORE.}{