Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct collocations ("handwriting" or "writing by hand"), and give one specific supporting reason with an example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can type much faster and easily edit my text. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can correct mistakes and rearrange sentences quickly, which saves time and improves clarity.

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatical topic sentence and add specific frequency details. Avoid numerical typos and use linking words like "but" and "however" correctly. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop rather than a desktop. I don't type every day, but I type assignments or emails about two or three times a week.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and a clear timeline. Start with a direct answer, then give brief supporting details about how you learned and improved. Remove filler words and correct tense mistakes.

Exemplo: I never learned typing formally; I taught myself. Over the years I practised while doing schoolwork and gradually became faster and more accurate.

Sugestão: Be specific and coherent. Provide one clear method and explain how it helps your typing. Avoid unclear fragments and irrelevant details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: Mostly I improve my typing by practising while playing computer games, because they require quick key presses and improve my accuracy. For instance, fast-paced games force me to react quickly, which has helped increase my typing speed.

× I prefer typing to writing to hand over because I type fast type uh.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I type quickly.

Grammar problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 26 (Sentence structure errors). The original mixes phrases ('writing to hand over') and repeats 'type' making the sentence ungrammatical. 'Handwriting' is the correct noun for writing by hand (singular noun form fits here). Use the adverb 'quickly' to modify the verb 'type' rather than the adjective 'fast' placed incorrectly. Simplify the structure to clearly compare 'typing' and 'handwriting'.

× Also I can easily edit what I type uh, which makes it more convenient, uh, in case, uh, some in case sometimes find too difficult to understand.

✓ Also, I can easily edit what I type, which makes it more convenient if some people find my handwriting difficult to read.

Grammar problem types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The phrase 'in case, uh, some in case sometimes find too difficult to understand' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'if' to introduce the condition and 'people' as the subject. 'Find my handwriting difficult to read' is a clear and natural expression. Add commas for clarity and remove filler words.

× I usually type 1 laptop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop.

Grammar problem type: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The preposition 'on' is required with 'type' and devices: 'type on a laptop'. The '1' is an error possibly for 'on'. Use the article 'a' before 'laptop'.

× I wouldn't say everyday but I do type of assignments or write emails at least two or three times a week.

✓ I wouldn't say every day, but I do type assignments or write emails at least two or three times a week.

Grammar problem types: 22 (Article errors) and 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs) and 6 (Present tense issue). 'Everyday' is an adjective meaning ordinary; the adverbial phrase should be 'every day'. Remove the unnecessary preposition 'of' after 'type'—use the verb directly with the object 'assignments'. Add a comma for clarity.

× I never formally learnt typing.

✓ I never formally learned to type.

Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue) and 8 (Verb + -ing form). 'Learnt' is acceptable in British English, but the more natural expression is 'learned to type' with the infinitive 'to type' rather than 'learnt typing'. Use 'learned' (or 'learnt') consistently and follow with 'to type' to indicate the skill acquired.

× Oh I just start doing it my own and gradually I become faster.

✓ Oh, I just started doing it on my own, and gradually I became faster.

Grammar problem types: 5 (Past tense issue) and 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 15 (Incorrect reflexive pronoun use). The timeline requires past tense: 'started' and 'became'. Use the preposition 'on' with 'my own' to indicate doing something independently. Add commas and 'and' for correct sentence structure.

× Uh, mostly I play in computer games.

✓ Uh, mostly I play computer games.

Grammar problem types: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The verb 'play' does not require the preposition 'in' with 'computer games'. Remove 'in' for natural English.

× Uh, it's, it's also helped me.

✓ Uh, it's also helped me.

Grammar problem type: 26 (Sentence structure errors). The original has an unnecessary repetition 'it's, it's'. Keep a single 'it's' to be grammatical and concise.

× I have find a lot of, uh, find location of The Cave.

✓ I have found a lot of locations of the cave.

Grammar problem types: 9 (Verb in the past participle form) and 17 (Incorrect use of the definite article) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). In present perfect tense use the past participle 'found' after 'have'. Use the plural 'locations' if there are multiple locations. Use the definite article 'the' only if 'the cave' is a specific place known to listener; lowercase 'cave' unless it's a proper name. Remove filler words and duplicate 'find'.