Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise, use a clear topic sentence and add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid minor grammar errors (use 'vocabulary' or 'vocabularies' correctly) and reduce redundancy.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember new words and sentence structures. For example, when I copy new vocabulary into a notebook, I review and recall them more easily later.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence, remove fillers (uh, like), correct grammar (e.g., 'two places' or 'two offices'), and combine ideas with linking words. Keep it within a few clear sentences.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I travel between two offices for work. Therefore, the laptop is convenient to carry and lets me work from either location.

Sugestão: Give a direct response with a clear time reference, avoid hesitations and extra clauses. Use correct tense (started) and concise supporting detail about who taught you and how.

Exemplo: I started learning to type when I was about 12. My dad gave me lessons and encouraged me to type school reports, which helped me improve quickly.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence about current practice, then contrast past and present with linking words. Correct small errors and avoid repetition. Be specific about the websites or methods you use now.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites. When I was younger I learned through typing games, but now I use structured sites like TypingClub to practice accuracy and speed.

× It helps me to remember what I write on the paper, like vocabularies and sentences.

✓ It helps me remember what I write on the paper, like vocabulary and sentences.

'Vocabularies' is incorrect in English: 'vocabulary' is an uncountable noun when referring to a set of words; use 'vocabulary' not 'vocabularies'. Also 'helps me to remember' can be simplified to 'helps me remember'. Suggestion: Use uncountable nouns properly and avoid unnecessary infinitival 'to' after 'help'.

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard because, uh, my work I have to work on two places, my office and another offices.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because my work requires me to work in two places: my office and another office.

Original sentence has awkward clause order and plural mismatch 'another offices' (singular 'another' must modify singular noun). Also 'my work I have to work' is ungrammatical. Use 'requires me to' or 'I have to work'. Suggestion: Keep subject and verb together and ensure noun number matches determiners (another + singular).

× It's it's quite easy to like carry it with me.

✓ It's quite easy to carry with me.

Redundant filler 'like' is unnecessary and 'carry it with me' is better as 'carry with me' or 'carry it with me' (but 'carry with me' is more natural after 'easy to'). Remove repeated 'it's'. Suggestion: Avoid filler words and repeated words; simplify phrase structure.

× I can't remember it clearly but I think I start using the laptop like typing the report when I was about 12 and my dad, he supported me by the lesson that I have to learn on typing.

✓ I can't remember it clearly but I think I started using a laptop to type reports when I was about 12, and my dad helped me by giving me lessons in typing.

Tense inconsistency: 'I start' should be past 'I started' to match 'when I was about 12'. 'Like typing the report' is awkward; use 'to type reports'. 'He supported me by the lesson that I have to learn on typing' is ungrammatical: use 'helped me by giving me lessons in typing'. Suggestion: Keep past actions in past tense and use clear verb forms like 'helped' and 'gave lessons'.

× When I was little I learned through the video games so I it's like it asks you to type along with the game, but right now it has plenty of them online so you just use it through the website.

✓ When I was little I learned through video games: they asked you to type along with the game. Now there are plenty of typing games online, so you can just use them on websites.

Problems: 'the video games' should be 'video games' (no definite article). 'I it's like it asks you' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; 'they asked' matches past. 'Right now it has plenty of them online' is incorrect subject use; use 'there are plenty...online' and 'use them on websites' rather than 'through the website'. Suggestion: Use correct articles, match subjects and verbs, and use 'on websites' for online resources.