Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor word choices while adding a linking phrase to improve coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two brief supporting reasons using linking words. Replace awkward phrases like "type document" with "typed documents" and avoid repetition of "I think."

Exemplo: I prefer both, depending on the situation. For work, I prefer typing because it's easier to edit and share typed documents with colleagues. However, for relaxation, I prefer handwriting because it feels more creative and helps me think more clearly.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and avoid redundancy. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then list specific tasks with linking words. Correct verb forms and remove repeated connectors like "so." Keep it within three sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day. My job requires me to draft reports, prepare PowerPoint presentations and respond to emails, so I rely on my laptop for most professional tasks. As a result, I usually spend several hours typing each day, even at home.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but can be tightened with a stronger topic sentence and a linking phrase to connect past and present. Provide a brief example of how practice improved your speed to add specificity.

Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school during basic computer lessons. At first my speed was quite slow, but with regular practice at work I gradually improved—for example, I can now type twice as fast as I did in school due to daily use.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct sentence structure and avoid repetition. Start with a clear method, use a linking word, and provide a concrete example of a timing routine or tool. Remove filler words and fix grammar (e.g., "I just I've noticed" should be simplified).

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice on my computer and phone. In addition, I time myself typing a paragraph once or twice a week using an online timer to track speed and accuracy and focus on specific drills when I see weak areas.

× Also, it's easier to share the type document with my colleagues.

✓ Also, it's easier to share the typed document with my colleagues.

The student used 'type document' which is incorrect. The intended meaning is a document that has been typed, so the past participle 'typed' should modify 'document'. This is an article/word choice error because the noun phrase is incorrect. Suggestion: use past participle adjectives (typed) to describe the document, or rephrase as 'a document I typed' or 'an electronic document'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× For relaxation, I prefer handwriting because I think it's more creative

✓ For relaxation, I prefer handwriting because I think it's more creative.

The sentence lacks a closing punctuation mark which can affect perceived completeness. Also add a period. No tense change needed. Suggestion: always finish declarative sentences with a period. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Absolutely, I use my laptop keyboard every day because my job requires me draft report, prepare PowerPoint presentations and respond to emails.

✓ Absolutely, I use my laptop keyboard every day because my job requires me to draft reports, prepare PowerPoint presentations, and respond to emails.

The verbs after 'requires me' need the infinitive form 'to draft' and 'reports' should be plural to match general tasks. Also add commas in a list. Suggestion: use 'requires me to' + base verb, and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× So I freely rely on my laptop for almost my professional tasks.

✓ So I rely on my laptop for almost all my professional tasks.

The phrase 'almost my professional tasks' is missing a quantifier; 'almost all' is the correct collocation. 'Freely rely' is also awkward; use just 'rely'. Suggestion: use 'almost all' to indicate most of the tasks. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× So I usually spend several hours typing both at home.

✓ So I usually spend several hours typing at home.

'Both' is unnecessary here because no two locations are specified. Remove 'both' for correct sentence structure. Suggestion: omit 'both' unless comparing two places (for example, 'both at home and at the office'). Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I first learned to type in the primary school during the basic computer lessons.

✓ I first learned to type in primary school during basic computer lessons.

In English, 'primary school' and 'basic computer lessons' normally do not require the definite article when speaking generally. Remove 'the' before both phrases. Suggestion: omit articles for institutions or classes when speaking about them in general. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× At that time, my typing speed was quite slow. I improved later when I started working because of the everyday use.

✓ At that time, my typing speed was quite slow. I improved later when I started working because of daily use.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning ordinary; the correct adverb is 'daily' to indicate frequency. Also wording 'because of daily use' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'daily' for adverbial meaning and prefer concise phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× For me, the more I type, the faster and the more accurate I get, I just I've noticed improvement just by using computer and phone daily.

✓ For me, the more I type, the faster and more accurate I get. I have noticed improvement simply by using the computer and my phone daily.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence needs to be split; 'the faster and more accurate I get' is fine but remove the extra 'the'; 'I just I've' is ungrammatical — use 'I have' or 'I've'; 'just by using computer' requires an article 'the' and 'phone' should be 'my phone' for clarity. Suggestion: split into two sentences, use 'I've noticed' and include articles for specific devices. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× Additionally, I time myself typing a paragraph once or twice a week to track my progress.

✓ Additionally, I time myself typing a paragraph once or twice a week to track my progress.

This sentence is grammatically correct: 'time myself typing' correctly uses the -ing form after 'time myself'. No change needed. Suggestion: keep as is. Grammar problem type ID: 8