Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, fix grammar and hesitations, and add one specific example to support your preference. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and avoid filler words like “umm.”

Exemplo: I prefer typing on a computer because it’s faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays I can quickly rearrange paragraphs and use spell-check to reduce mistakes. This saves time and helps me produce neater work.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and word choice, remove hesitations, and give one specific daily activity as an example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “for example,” “so”).

Exemplo: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I own a laptop and it’s portable. For example, I use it to take notes during online lectures and to draw diagrams with a stylus. As a result, it meets both my study and creative needs.

Sugestão: Structure your answer clearly: give a time frame, describe how you learned, and include one specific detail. Remove repetition and correct tense and phrasing errors. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child, around seven or eight, while my parents taught me basic computer skills. For example, I used to type the names of my favourite cartoons into the search bar and watch them, which made learning fun and memorable.

Sugestão: Be specific about methods you use to improve typing (e.g., practice exercises, typing tests, touch-typing websites) and avoid uncertainty phrases. Use clear linking to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on websites like TypingClub and by setting a goal to type for 15 minutes a day. Because I practice while doing homework, I get faster and make fewer errors over time.

× I would prefer typing on a computer because it is much more convenient and less time consuming.

✓ I would prefer typing on a computer because it is much more convenient and less time-consuming.

'time consuming' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun: 'time-consuming'. This makes the phrase modify 'it' correctly. Use hyphenation for compound modifiers to avoid ambiguity.

× Typing is easier to edit and umm, usually produce fewer mistakes thanks to spell editing and formatting tools, which makes organizing paragraphs much simpler.

✓ Typing is easier to edit and usually produces fewer mistakes thanks to spell-checking and formatting tools, which makes organizing paragraphs much simpler.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice errors: 'produce' should be 'produces' to agree with singular subject 'Typing'. 'spell editing' is awkward; use 'spell-checking' or 'spell check'. Remove filler 'umm'. Ensure verb agrees with gerund subject.

× I own a laptop so obviously I would use my laptop keyboard more, especially in my daily life.

✓ I own a laptop, so obviously I use my laptop keyboard more, especially in my daily life.

Tense/modal misuse: 'would use' implies conditional; simple present 'use' is appropriate for habitual action. Add a comma before 'so' for clarity.

× I often use it for my own studying and it can offers me a variety of choices, uh from for ranging from drawing to finishing my studying task.

✓ I often use it for my own studying, and it can offer me a variety of choices, ranging from drawing to finishing my study tasks.

Multiple issues: 'offers' should be 'offer' to match 'it' (modal 'can' + base verb). Remove extraneous prepositions 'from for' and redundant 'uh'. Use 'ranging from...to...' for correct phrase. 'studying task' is awkward; 'study tasks' is clearer and plural.

× I think it was long ago when I was with my mum and dad and learned how to use a computer.

✓ I think it was long ago when I was with my mum and dad and learned how to use a computer.

Sentence is grammatically correct in tense; no change needed. Included here to show it's correct and matches past context.

× I often typed my favorite cartoon on a searching bar and watch whenever I feel bored.

✓ I often typed the name of my favorite cartoon into the search bar and watched it whenever I felt bored.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'typed ... on a searching bar' should be 'typed the name ... into the search bar'. 'watch' should be past tense 'watched' to match past habit 'typed' and 'whenever I felt bored'. Also add 'it' to refer to the cartoon.

× I think it is very I think I that those memory really unforgettable and meaningful to me.

✓ I think those memories are really unforgettable and meaningful to me.

Run-on and redundant phrases: remove repeated words 'I think' and fix noun/adjective forms: 'memory' should be plural 'memories', and use 'are' to link subject and predicate. 'Really' modifies adjective 'unforgettable'.

× I don't know if this is counted or not, but I often find myself typing while finishing my tasks.

✓ I don't know if this counts or not, but I often find myself typing while finishing my tasks.

Verb form: 'is counted' is passive and awkward; use active 'counts' for the idea of being considered. The rest is fine.

× I think it is a very great way to multitasking.

✓ I think it is a great way to multitask.

Word form errors: 'multitasking' (noun/gerund) should be 'to multitask' (infinitive) after 'way to'. Also 'very great' is redundant; 'great' is sufficient.

× Uh, not only did I finish my tasks but on time, but I also improve my own typing skills.

✓ Not only did I finish my tasks on time, but I also improved my typing skills.

Placement and tense errors: 'on time' should follow 'finish my tasks' not between clauses. Use past tense 'did... finish' paired with 'improved' for parallel past-tense structure. Remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'my own' unless emphasis is needed.