Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: state your preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons with linking words, and avoid unfinished clauses. Use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember vocabulary better and makes me feel more relaxed. For example, when I take notes by hand I can summarize ideas in my own words, which improves retention.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct vocabulary: say whether you type daily and use the right terms (desktop, laptop). Give a brief reason using linking words and avoid fillers like 'uh'.

Exemplo: I don't type on a desktop every day, but I do sometimes use a laptop keyboard because it is more convenient and allows my hands to move freely. For instance, I use my laptop when I write emails or homework.

Sugestão: Provide a clear timeframe and a coherent description of the learning process. Use correct grammar for past events and clearer linking words (first, then, later). Avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in fifth grade. First, my teacher showed us the proper finger positions, then we practiced simple exercises, and after several weeks I became much faster, although it was difficult at the beginning.

Sugestão: Explain specific methods and use natural phrasing. Mention particular activities and frequency, and use linking words to organize your points. Correct word choice (improve, homework).

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing on my laptop every day, doing online typing exercises, and completing my homework by typing rather than handwriting. As a result, my speed and accuracy have gradually improved.

× Well, I mostly prefer handwriting rather than typing.

✓ Well, I mostly prefer handwriting to typing.

'Prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two options (prefer A to B). Using 'rather than' is informal and less appropriate here; change to 'prefer handwriting to typing' for correct collocation.

× While writing by ourselves means we can know the word and makes our mind relax in writing whereas.

✓ When we write by hand, we can remember words better and it helps our mind relax.

The original is a run-on fragment with incorrect structures: 'by ourselves' is awkward, 'know the word' should be 'remember words', and 'makes our mind relax in writing' is ungrammatical. Rewriting clarifies meaning and corrects verb forms and word order.

× I usually don't uh type on disk or laptop keyboard also, but sometimes I choose laptop keyboards because it is easy and my hand can move.

✓ I usually don't type on desktop or laptop keyboards, but sometimes I use a laptop because it is easy and my hands can move freely.

'disk' is incorrect for 'desktop', missing plural for 'keyboards', and article use and pronoun agreement are wrong. Also 'my hand can move' should be plural 'my hands can move freely'. Replace 'choose' with 'use' for natural collocation.

× When I was in five class, my teacher taught me how to type in keyboards.

✓ When I was in fifth grade, my teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Use ordinal 'fifth' with 'grade' for age/level, and correct preposition is 'in' when referring to grades: 'in fifth grade'. 'Type on a keyboard' is standard; 'keyboards' plural is unnecessary here.

× First she taught us about the finger, so we should give in a keyboard and then slowly I should to learn through that and first it was difficult but.

✓ First she taught us the proper finger positions for the keyboard, then we practiced slowly and at first it was difficult.

Original has many structural problems and incorrect modal usage ('should to learn'). Clarify 'finger positions' and use past simple 'practiced' and 'was difficult' to match narrative past tense.

× Prove my typing by writing on laptops, keyboards or doing my homeworks through the laptop so so that I can maintain my typing more perfect and better.

✓ I improve my typing by writing on a laptop and doing my homework on it so that I can make my typing more accurate and faster.

'Prove' is wrong verb; use 'improve'. 'Homeworks' should be 'homework' (uncountable). 'More perfect and better' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'more accurate and faster' or 'better'. Ensure present simple 'I improve' fits habitual action.