Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting because umm in my opinion I love how it feels when the pen touch the paper and also it feels more uh, it's feel warmer for me to hand write something myself.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I type umm uh, not only laptop but desk desktop keyboard every day, and I also own my technical keyboard for a beautiful sound.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
It's since elementary school because I loved playing video games at that time, so I type a lot on my keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I mean, practice makes perfect, so the more you type, the more you can type faster and yeah, MMM, prob. We doing assignment with laptop and also the presentation also help.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 62.0Sugestão: 回答要更简洁、语法更准确并用链接词组织句子。注意去掉填充词(如 "umm", "uh")并修正主谓一致和时态。可以先给出主题句,再用一到两句具体原因或例子支持。比如说明情感原因和记忆效果。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting. I enjoy the tactile feeling of a pen on paper, which makes writing feel more personal and memorable. For example, I find that notes I write by hand are easier to recall later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 回答应更自然、用词准确,并避免重复。先直接回答是或否,然后解释并给出具体细节或例子。把"technical"改为更合适的形容词如"mechanical",并说明使用场景。
Exemplo: Yes, I use both a laptop and a desktop keyboard every day. I also own a mechanical keyboard because I like its tactile feedback and the pleasant clicking sound when I type.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答应更符合语法,使用正确的时态和完整句子。可以先给出时间点,再说明原因或背景,并用连接词使句子流畅。避免口语化的片段。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because I played many video games, which required frequent keyboard use. As a result, I became comfortable typing at an early age.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答应更有条理并用具体方法说明改进措施,避免填充词和不完整句。可以列出具体练习方法并用连接词连接,如练习软件、定期练习和实际任务。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using typing tutor software to work on accuracy and speed. In addition, completing assignments and giving presentations on a laptop gives me real-world practice that helps me get faster.
× I prefer handwriting because umm in my opinion I love how it feels when the pen touch the paper and also it feels more uh, it's feel warmer for me to hand write something myself.
✓ I prefer handwriting because, in my opinion, I love how it feels when the pen touches the paper, and it feels warmer for me to handwrite something myself.
问题类型包括:27(主谓一致错误)和26(句子结构错误)。1) “the pen touch” 主语是单数,动词需加 -s,改为 “the pen touches”。2) “it's feel warmer” 中同时使用了之 be 动词和动词原形,造成结构混乱,应使用单一谓语“it feels warmer”。3) “hand write” 多数情况写作合成词“handwrite”。建议:注意主语单复数与动词形式一致;避免在一句中叠用多重谓语,保持句子简洁;熟悉常见合成动词的书写。
× Yes, I type umm uh, not only laptop but desk desktop keyboard every day, and I also own my technical keyboard for a beautiful sound.
✓ Yes, I type every day, not only on a laptop but also on a desktop keyboard, and I also own my mechanical keyboard because of its beautiful sound.
问题类型包括:1(单复数/形式问题)和11(介词使用)以及词汇搭配。1) 需要在“laptop”前加介词“on”并在“desktop keyboard”前加“on”。2) “desk desktop” 重复,改为“desktop”。3) “technical keyboard” 用词不当,应为“mechanical keyboard”(机械键盘)更自然;同时补充“because of its”来说明原因。建议:注意介词搭配(on a laptop/on a desktop)、避免重复词,使用更恰当的名词表达设备类型。
× It's since elementary school because I loved playing video games at that time, so I type a lot on my keyboard.
✓ I've been typing since elementary school because I loved playing video games at that time, so I used the keyboard a lot.
问题类型包括:6(现在时/现在完成时)和5(过去时)。1) “It's since elementary school” 时间段应使用现在完成进行时表达持续到现在:"I've been typing since elementary school"。2) 后半句涉及过去的习惯,“so I type a lot” 与前句时态不一致,应改为过去时“so I used the keyboard a lot”。建议:描述从过去持续到现在的动作用现在完成时/现在完成进行时;谈过去习惯用过去时。
× I mean, practice makes perfect, so the more you type, the more you can type faster and yeah, MMM, prob. We doing assignment with laptop and also the presentation also help.
✓ I mean, practice makes perfect, so the more you type, the faster you can type. We do assignments on a laptop, and preparing presentations also helps.
问题类型包括:4(情态动词/动词形式)和26(句子结构)以及27(主谓一致)。1) “the more you can type faster” 的词序和重复“more/faster”不自然,改为 “the faster you can type”。2) “We doing assignment” 缺少助动词,应为 “We do assignments” 或 “We are doing assignments”。根据语境用一般现在时更合适。3) “the presentation also help” 主谓不一致,应为 “presentations also help” 或 “preparing presentations also helps”。建议:注意助动词使用与动词形式一致;保持比较结构清晰;主谓一致,复数名词与单复数动词匹配。