Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because I think it's so faster and easier when I want to. Ride along a report. I think a typing is convenient.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I use tab on the laptop keyboard everyday because my work and homework usually on the computer. So I need to finish my homework on the computer. So I need to use keyboard everyday, laptop keyboard everyday.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned how to tap on the keyboard in my primary school because we have computer class and our teacher teach us how to use keyboard and I also play some typing games to improve my keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think improve my typing skills by practice in my school life or some homework, some homework in my computer. So I usually finish my homework and chatting online. So I think typing in my.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答需要更自然、简洁并且直接回应问题。注意语法(例如“so faster”应为“much faster”或“so much faster”),避免不连贯的短句(如“Ride along a report”不清晰)。可以用一到两句说明原因并举一两个具体例子来支持。练习使用连词(because, so, therefore)使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it’s much faster and more convenient for me. For example, when I write reports or emails I can edit and format text quickly, which saves a lot of time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答重复较多且句子结构单一,应直接陈述并用一到两句补充具体原因或频率。注意词汇准确性(例如“tab”应为“tablet”或更可能是“type on”)。避免重复短语,使用连接词提高连贯性。
Exemplo: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because both my job and studies require me to work on the computer. As a result, I use the laptop for emails, assignments and quick research almost daily.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答基本清楚但有语法错误与措辞不当(如“tap on the keyboard”、“improve my keyboard”)。应用一到两句说明时间并加上具体细节(例如学校的课程或练习方法)。使用正确时态和词汇(learned, teacher taught, typing games to improve typing speed)。
Exemplo: I learned to type in primary school during our computer classes, where the teacher showed us basic finger placement. Later, I practiced with online typing games to increase my speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答含糊且重复,缺乏具体方法和逻辑连接。应明确列出具体练习方式(例如定期练习、使用练习软件、参加课程)并说明效果(提高速度或准确性)。控制在最多五句并使用连接词使表达连贯。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly: I complete computer-based homework, use online typing tutors, and set aside 15 minutes a day for speed drills. This routine has helped me reduce errors and type faster.
× I prefer typing because I think it's so faster and easier when I want to.
✓ I prefer typing because I think it's much faster and easier when I want to.
句中使用了 so faster,这是不正确的比较结构。比较级 faster 前通常不能直接用 so 修饰,应使用 much 或 very 或使用 as ... as 结构。建议用 much faster 或者 very fast。
× I think a typing is convenient.
✓ I think typing is convenient.
这里的 typing 是动名词,表示一种活动或行为,不需要不定冠词 a。使用 a typing 会造成不定冠词误用。建议去掉冠词。
× I use tab on the laptop keyboard everyday because my work and homework usually on the computer.
✓ I use the laptop keyboard every day because my work and homework are usually on the computer.
原句中 'tab' 用法不当且缺少定冠词;everyday 应为副词短语 every day,两词分开;此外主语 work and homework 复数时需要系动词 are。建议使用 'the laptop keyboard every day' 并补上系动词。
× So I need to finish my homework on the computer.
✓ So I need to finish my homework on the computer.
该句语法正确。保留原句。
× So I need to use keyboard everyday, laptop keyboard everyday.
✓ So I need to use the keyboard every day — the laptop keyboard every day.
需要加定冠词 the 来指特定的键盘;everyday 应为 every day(副词短语)。重复短语可以用破折号或括号清晰表达。
× I learned how to tap on the keyboard in my primary school because we have computer class and our teacher teach us how to use keyboard and I also play some typing games to improve my keyboard.
✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in primary school because we had computer class and our teacher taught us how to use the keyboard, and I also played some typing games to improve my typing.
存在多处时态和词形错误:learned 与过去时态应呼应,故将 have→had、teach→taught;tap→type 更合适;use keyboard 需要定冠词 the;improve my keyboard 用法不当,应为 improve my typing(动名词表示技能)。此外并列句需要逗号和连词。
× I think improve my typing skills by practice in my school life or some homework, some homework in my computer.
✓ I think I improved my typing skills by practicing at school and by doing computer homework.
原句缺主语 I 且动名词/动词形式不当:use improve my typing skills by practice 应为 improve ... by practicing;in my school life 表达不自然,改为 at school;some homework in my computer 应改为 computer homework 或 homework on the computer。时态根据上下文应为过去或现在完成,选择过去式 improved 更自然。
× So I usually finish my homework and chatting online.
✓ So I usually finish my homework and chat online.
并列结构中应保持动词形式一致,finish 与 chat 应该同为动词原形(或 finish ... and I chat)。原句将 chat 误用为现在分词 chatting,破坏平行结构。
× So I think typing in my.
✓ So I think typing is useful for me.
原句不完整,缺少宾语或补语。将其补为完整句子,例如 'typing is useful for me' 或 'I think I'm good at typing',使句子结构完整并符合语境。