Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、繰り返しや曖昧な表現があり、構造も不明瞭です。まずトピックセンテンスで明確に答え（I prefer handwriting.）、次に理由を2文以内で具体的に述べてください。余計なフィラー（um, I I）を減らし、時制や語順を正しく直しましょう。例えば「以前はコンピューターをあまり使わなかったので、タイピングが速くない」など具体的に言うと良いです。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me express my feelings more freely. Also, I didn’t use computers much when I was younger, so I’m not very fast at typing.

Sugestão: 答えは部分的に情報を含んでいますが、短くまとまっておらず繰り返しが目立ちます。まず肯定で始め（Yes, I do.）、どの機器を使うかを明確に伝え、その後に頻度や目的を具体的に述べてください。接続詞（for example, because）を使って論理をつなげると自然になります。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I use a laptop every day because I read IELTS materials and practice writing on it. I also type emails and letters to my teachers occasionally.

Sugestão: 回答は時を示していますが、文法と語順に多くの誤りと繰り返しがあります。まず一文で時期を明確に述べ（In junior high school, etc.）、次にその授業の内容を簡潔に説明してください。過去形と単数・複数の一致に注意し、フィラーを減らしましょう。

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in junior high school. We had a computer class where we were taught basic typing and how to use different programs.

Sugestão: 良い点は練習していると述べていることですが、表現が不自然で文法ミスがあります。まず短く明確に方法を述べ（I practice every day.）、次に具体的な練習法（typing games, lessons, timed exercises）や頻度を示すと効果的です。"illustrate my ideas"は不自然なので"type my ideas"や"write drafts"に直しましょう。

Exemplo: I practice typing every day using online typing exercises and timed tests. I also type drafts of my ideas on the computer to improve my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because it is easy for me to illustrate my feeling.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is easy for me to illustrate my feelings.

The pronoun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' here because the speaker refers to general emotions or ideas, not a single specific feeling. Use plural with countable nouns when speaking generally about multiple instances. Suggestion: Use 'feelings' to refer to emotions/ideas in general.

× Umm I I didn't.

✓ Umm, I didn't use computers much before.

The original fragment 'I didn't.' is incomplete and unclear. It needs an object and context. Rewriting to 'I didn't use computers much before' completes the sentence and clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Always include the verb and object to form a complete clause.

× I didn't use computers before so much before, so I cannot type in quickly.

✓ I didn't use computers much before, so I cannot type quickly.

The phrase 'before so much before' is redundant and 'type in quickly' has awkward adverb placement. Move 'quickly' after the verb 'type' and remove repeated 'before'. Suggestion: Place adverbs near the main verb and avoid redundancy.

× Yes, I I practice.

✓ Yes, I practice.

The original repeats the pronoun 'I' twice, which is a speech disfluency rather than a grammar rule. Removing the duplicate yields a correct sentence. Suggestion: Remove repeated words when they are unintended.

× I read IELTS writing on computers so I I use laptop every day and I also like some letters for my teachers sometimes.

✓ I read IELTS writing on the computer, so I use my laptop every day, and I sometimes write letters to my teachers.

Use 'on the computer' or 'on computers' rather than 'on computers' for general activity; include the article 'the' for specific activity. 'Use laptop' needs 'my laptop.' 'Like some letters' is incorrect: the intended meaning is 'write letters to.' Prepositions: 'write to someone' or 'send letters to.' Suggestion: Include articles with singular nouns and choose correct verb-preposition collocations like 'write letters to'.

× When I was a junior high school students, I uh, I have a class which tell which we, we learned how to use computers at that time.

✓ When I was in junior high school, I had a class where we learned how to use computers.

'When I was a junior high school students' mixes singular/plural; use 'in junior high school' or 'a junior high school student.' Verb tense: 'have' should be past 'had.' 'A class which tell which we' is ungrammatical; use 'a class where we learned.' Suggestion: Match singular/plural, use past tense for past events, and use 'where' to refer to a class.

× I, I learned how to type on computer at the first time.

✓ I learned how to type on a computer for the first time then.

Use past tense 'learned' (already present) and 'on a computer' requires article 'a.' 'At the first time' should be 'for the first time.' Suggestion: Use 'for the first time' to express the initial occurrence and include articles with singular countable nouns.

× Unfortunately I cannot type well, but I practice typing every day and I illustrate my ideas as possible as I can on computer.

✓ Unfortunately I cannot type well, but I practice typing every day and I put my ideas on the computer as clearly as I can.

'Illustrate my ideas as possible as I can on computer' is unidiomatic. Use 'put my ideas on the computer' or 'express my ideas on the computer.' Include article: 'on the computer.' Use comparative structure 'as clearly as I can' to indicate ability. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'express/put ideas on the computer' and the correct 'as...as' comparative form.