Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "it the first reason is"). Use precise vocabulary like "remember" and "customize my notes." Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I handwrite notes I can highlight and customize the layout, which makes reviewing easier; however, it is usually slower than typing.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first and then one or two concise supporting details. Avoid awkward phrases (e.g., "both entities", "muscle moving in that"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" and correct grammar ("I prefer handwriting on my iPad").

Exemplo: I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day. I usually handwrite notes on my iPad because it's more comfortable for me and the physical act of writing helps me focus.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer to the timing question, then add a brief comment. Avoid vague or awkward constructions (e.g., "in a very less time", "since when I was"). Use simple past or present perfect appropriately.

Exemplo: I started learning to type when I was about four or five years old. It was easy for me because I practiced regularly and got used to the keyboard layout quickly.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific, realistic advice with correct vocabulary and numbers. Fix unclear phrases ("five retirements daily") and grammar. Use linking words like "for example" and specify the apps or practices you recommend.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by using online typing websites and apps, such as TypingClub or Keybr. For example, I practice for 15–20 minutes daily using timed exercises and games, and I track my accuracy and speed to measure progress.

× I personally prefer handwriting because it the first reason is it helps me to remember things better and I write.

✓ I personally prefer handwriting because the first reason is that it helps me remember things better when I write.

The original sentence misuses the definite article and omits the conjunction 'that'. 'it the first reason is it helps me' is ungrammatical. Use 'the first reason is that' to introduce a clause, and omit the extra subject 'it' before 'helps'. Also remove the unnecessary 'to' before 'remember' to match standard verb pattern: 'helps me remember'. Suggestions: say 'the first reason is that' and avoid repeating subjects.

× And when you handwrite, you can actually change the font, you can actually make changes, and it might be a bit less quicker than typing, but that's what I prefer.

✓ And when you handwrite, you can change the style, you can make changes, and it might be a bit slower than typing, but that's what I prefer.

'Less quicker' is incorrect because 'quicker' is already a comparative; combine 'less' with a comparative is redundant. Use 'slower' as the opposite of 'quicker'. Also avoid repeating 'actually' for clarity. 'Change the font' is odd for handwriting; 'change the style' is more appropriate. Suggestion: choose one comparative form ('slower' or 'less quick'), and avoid redundant adverbs.

× Again, I don't personally use any of these devices to type every day.

✓ Again, I don't use any of these devices to type every day.

'Personally' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence wordy but not strictly ungrammatical. Simplifying to 'I don't use any of these devices to type every day' improves clarity and naturalness. Suggestion: avoid filler adverbs like 'personally' when they add no meaning.

× For an alternative, I have an iPad in which I still prefer to handwrite, although I can type and handwrite both entities.

✓ Alternatively, I have an iPad on which I still prefer to handwrite, although I can both type and handwrite on it.

Use 'on which' or 'on it' to indicate using the iPad for writing. 'For an alternative' is awkward; 'Alternatively' or 'As an alternative' is more natural. 'Both entities' is incorrect; use 'both' before verbs or 'both of them' for nouns. Rearranged to 'both type and handwrite on it'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'on' for devices and place 'both' before verbs when listing actions.

× I prefer handwriting because I think it's way more comfortable for me and it gets and it makes me more aware of what I'm actually writing because it involves muscle moving in that.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I think it's much more comfortable for me, and it makes me more aware of what I'm actually writing because it involves muscle movement.

Use 'much more comfortable' instead of informal 'way more'. Remove the duplicated 'it gets and it makes'. 'Muscle moving' is ungrammatical; the correct noun phrase is 'muscle movement'. Also remove 'in that' which is unnecessary. Suggestion: avoid informal intensifiers in exam speech, remove duplication, and use correct noun forms.

× Typing on a keyboard isn't a very difficult task and I think everyone can learn it in a very less time.

✓ Typing on a keyboard isn't a very difficult task, and I think everyone can learn it in a very short time.

'Very less time' is incorrect; use 'a very short time' or 'a short time'. 'Less' does not combine with 'very' here. The rest of the sentence uses present tense correctly. Suggestion: use 'short' with 'time' to express brevity.

× It's just about knowing the pattern of the keyboard.

✓ It's just about knowing the layout of the keyboard.

'Pattern of the keyboard' is understandable but 'layout of the keyboard' is the conventional collocation in English. Suggestion: use 'layout' when referring to key arrangement.

× I learned typing on the keyboard since when I was maybe 4 or five years.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was maybe four or five years old.

'Learned typing' is less natural than 'learned to type'. 'Since when I was' is incorrect for a past time; use 'when I was'. Add 'old' after the age. Spell out small numbers in speech transcripts commonly as words. Suggestion: use 'learned to type' and 'when I was X years old' for past age references.

× There are various websites and apps which can help you improve your typing.

✓ There are various websites and apps that can help you improve your typing.

'Which' is not wrong here but in defining relative clauses 'that' is more natural in spoken English. This is a stylistic correction rather than a strict grammar error. Suggestion: use 'that' for essential clauses in conversation.

× They provide motivating games and actually show you your results so you can get aware of what level you're actually at.

✓ They provide motivating games and show you your results so you can be aware of what level you're at.

'Get aware of' is incorrect; use 'be aware of' or 'become aware of'. Remove duplicate 'actually'. The rest rephrased for naturalness. Suggestion: use 'be aware of' and avoid redundant adverbs.

× And they provide practice, which you can do for five retirements daily and you typing can be improved easily within a month.

✓ And they provide practice exercises, which you can do for five minutes daily, and your typing can be improved easily within a month.

'Five retirements' is a misrecognition; context suggests 'five minutes'. 'You typing' should be 'your typing'. Also add 'exercises' after 'practice' for clarity. Corrects pronoun/possessive error. Suggestion: use 'five minutes daily' and 'your typing' to indicate improvement.