Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., "I prefer handwriting.") then give one or two specific reasons without filler words. Use linking words like "because" or "although" and avoid hesitations (uh, like).

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting. At my school we usually write by hand, and I find it helps me remember information better because writing slows me down and makes me focus. However, I sometimes type for quick messages.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize ideas logically. Begin with a clear yes/no, then give specific supporting details using linking words ("but", "because", "so"). Remove repetition and fillers. Mention frequency and device types concisely.

Exemplo: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day. I type on my iPad daily to chat with friends, but I don't own a personal laptop yet. I hope to buy one soon so I can do more work comfortably.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference, then add one or two concise details. Avoid unclear abbreviations and filler words. Use correct tense and comparative phrases ("faster and more comfortable than").

Exemplo: I learned to type when I got my first iPad at about 11 years old. Since then I found typing much faster and more convenient than handwriting, although I still prefer handwriting for studying.

Sugestão: Provide a clear method and add a specific improvement detail. Start with a topic sentence, then explain how often and what practices help (e.g., typing exercises, online lessons). Use correct verb forms and fewer fillers.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing daily through chatting with friends and doing short typing exercises. Typing messages every day has increased my speed and reduced mistakes, and occasionally I use an online typing tutor to work on accuracy.

× I would say I prefer handwriting because, uh, at Elau, uh, we use handwriting instead of like, uh, typing in their iPad or laptop because, uh, in school it's just like that.

✓ I would say I prefer handwriting because at Elau we use handwriting instead of typing on iPads or laptops, because at school it's like that.

Use correct prepositions: 'typing in their iPad' is wrong; we type on a device so use 'on'. Use plural 'iPads or laptops' to match 'their' implied plural users. Remove unnecessary filler words for clarity.

× I would say no, I did not have my own laptop or or computers, but I have uh typing on my keyboard on my iPad every day because I'm chatting with my friend every day.

✓ I would say no, I do not have my own laptop or computer, but I type on the keyboard of my iPad every day because I chat with my friend daily.

Subject is present so use 'do not have' not 'did not have'. 'Laptop or or computers' has mixed singular/plural; choose singular 'laptop or computer' or plural consistently. Use correct verb forms: 'have typing' is incorrect; use 'type'. Use present simple 'chat' for habitual actions.

× Yes, but even have a chance. I want to buy a new uh laptop or keyboard.

✓ Yes, if I have the chance, I want to buy a new laptop or keyboard.

Original sentence fragment 'even have a chance' is ungrammatical. Use conditional structure 'if I have the chance' to express possibility. Keep noun choice consistent: 'laptop or keyboard' is acceptable but clarify intent if needed.

× Umm, it was when I have a MA.

✓ Umm, it was when I had a MA.

The time reference is past, so use past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. 'MA' presumably means 'Mac' or 'iPad' model; keep tense agreement.

× I have my first iPad since I was like uh, 11.

✓ I have had my first iPad since I was about 11.

When an action started in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect: 'have had ... since'. Also 'like' as filler replaced with 'about' for measured age.

× Yes, it's my first time typing on keyboard and I think it's like magic because like it's very fast and comfortable than handwriting, but I just prefer handwriting more than keyboard.

✓ Yes, it was my first time typing on a keyboard and I think it's like magic because it is much faster and more comfortable than handwriting, but I still prefer handwriting to typing.

Use past 'was' for first-time experience. Use article 'a keyboard'. Compare correctly: use 'faster and more comfortable than' and 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X more than Y'. Replace redundant 'like' fillers.

× I improve my typing by uh, chatting with my friend every day.

✓ I improve my typing by chatting with my friends every day.

Use plural 'friends' if referring to multiple friends as context implies; if singular, keep consistent. The preposition 'by' + gerund is correct here; remove filler 'uh'.

× Yes, it's just like that. I always chatting with my friends instead of calling each other.

✓ Yes, it's just like that. I always chat with my friends instead of calling each other.

Present simple 'I always chat' is correct for habitual actions. 'I always chatting' is incorrect because it lacks auxiliary; use 'am always chatting' for continuous or 'always chat' for habitual.

× We chatting every day and like my hand it's like not struggle anymore because it's comfortable to me.

✓ We chat every day and my hands do not struggle anymore because typing is comfortable for me.

Use correct verb form 'chat' for habitual action. 'My hand it's like not struggle anymore' is ungrammatical: use plural 'hands' (or 'hand') and correct auxiliary 'do not' + base verb 'struggle'. Use 'comfortable for me' rather than 'to me' for idiomatic phrasing.