Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and directly answer first, then give one or two clear reasons with specific examples. Avoid repetition, filler words (uh), and inaccurate claims (pencils don’t use many trees; paper does). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and search documents quickly on my laptop, which saves time when I study. Additionally, typing reduces the need for paper, so I use fewer sheets when taking notes.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating which you use daily, then give two concise reasons with a linking word. Correct small grammar errors (e.g., "I use" not "I uses") and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and I can work from different places. For instance, I can take it to the library or a café, whereas a desktop stays at home. Therefore, I prefer a laptop for daily typing.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference, then describe the learning context with specific details and correct tense usage. Avoid vague phrases and run-on sentences; use linking words like "because" or "since."

Exemplo: I learned to type when I finished sixth grade because I took a computer course at school. The course taught me basic Office applications and keyboard practice, so my speed was slow at first but improved with regular exercises.

Sugestão: Give a clear opening sentence about your method, then explain the routine with specific details (how often, what tools, how you track progress). Avoid repetition and complete your final sentence.

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I type a 400–500 word article on Microsoft Word three times a week and check my accuracy and speed with an online typing test. This routine helped me increase both speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer typing as compared to handwriting, but because I think typing is more convenient than handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I think typing is more convenient.

Redundant and awkward phrasing; use 'prefer A to B' for preference and keep one reason clause. Maintain present simple for general preference.

× And in handwriting, we spend a lot of resources like trees for making pencils and other plastic material which are used to make pens.

✓ Handwriting uses a lot of resources, such as trees for making pencils and plastic for pens.

Original sentence is wordy and misattributes 'we spend trees'; restructure to subject 'handwriting' and concise list. Use present simple for general truth and correct noun forms.

× As compared to this, I think typing is a more is a good option, uh, because it.

✓ For these reasons, I think typing is a better option.

Fragment and repetition ('is a more is a good') create an incomplete sentence. Replace with a complete comparative 'a better option' and remove filler 'uh' and trailing 'because'.

× Recently I uses a desktop for typing, but now I nowadays I'm using laptop because it's more convenient than desktop because I can take it anywhere.

✓ Recently I used a desktop for typing, but nowadays I use a laptop because it is more convenient; I can take it anywhere.

Tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'uses' incorrect with subject 'I' and 'recently' calls for past 'used'. Use consistent present simple 'use' for current habit. Remove repeated 'because' and keep clear clauses.

× While desktop is a heavy device, you can only use it at home instead of taking along it with you.

✓ A desktop is a heavy device; you can only use it at home instead of taking it with you.

Prepositional phrase order 'taking along it' is incorrect; correct form is 'take it with you'. Also add article 'A desktop' and simplify sentence.

× That's why I use laptop as compared to desktop.

✓ That's why I use a laptop instead of a desktop.

Use articles 'a laptop' and 'a desktop' and idiomatic 'instead of' rather than 'as compared to'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× I learned it when I completed my 6th standard.

✓ I learned it when I completed sixth grade.

'Completed my 6th standard' is non-idiomatic in many English varieties; 'completed sixth grade' is clearer. Past simple 'learned' and 'completed' are correct.

× I do a course computer course and in that course I will learn about Office 360, 365 about the and here I learn typing.

✓ I took a computer course where I learned about Office 365 and typing.

Tense inconsistency and repetition: mix of present and future 'do' and 'will learn'. Use past simple to match earlier 'I learned'. Correct product name to Office 365 and simplify sentence structure.

× Here I learn typing scale on keyboard.

✓ There I learned typing skills on the keyboard.

Awkward phrase 'typing scale' is incorrect; use 'typing skills'. Match past tense 'learned' and include article 'the keyboard'.

× At that time at early stage my typing speed was not good but with the passage of time.

✓ At that early stage my typing speed was not good, but it improved over time.

Sentence was incomplete and lacked a main clause after 'but'. Provide clear contrast and completion: 'it improved over time'.

× Practice practice is the key to improve anything I practice a lot I usually pick up a topic of around 400 to 500 words and start typing it on word and this will help me a lot while help me a lot in making my overall typing typing good and this is the only way I.

✓ Practice is the key to improvement; I practice a lot. I usually choose a topic of around 400 to 500 words and type it in Word. This helps me improve my overall typing skills.

Run-on sentence, repetition ('practice practice', 'help me a lot while help me a lot', 'typing typing') and incomplete ending. Break into short sentences, use noun 'improvement', correct 'type it in Word', and use plural 'skills'.