Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: correct tense and article errors, avoid repetition, and make answer more concise with one clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail using a linking word. Add a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because it helps me concentrate better. For example, when I take notes by hand in class, I remember key points more easily than when I type, so I often retain information longer.

Sugestão: Fix pronunciation and sentence structure, avoid unnecessary details, and use linking words to make it coherent. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason and a brief specific example. Correct individual word errors (e.g., tie -> type) and awkward phrases.

Exemplo: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can use it at school, at home, or when I visit the dentist, so I can finish homework or read notes anywhere.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and clearer: give a clean topic sentence stating age, then explain reason with one concise supporting detail. Remove repetition and incomplete ending; provide a specific context for importance.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about ten years old because my father insisted it was an essential skill. He thought it would help me with schoolwork and future jobs, so he encouraged me to practice regularly.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and filler words, use clearer sequence and specific details about the app or practice routine. Start with a topic sentence, then briefly describe how the practice works and give a result or frequency using linking words.

Exemplo: I use a typing app to practice every day. The app shows words on the screen and times my speed and accuracy, so after two weeks of daily practice I noticed my typing became faster and more accurate.

× I prefer handwriting, even though with the rapid development of electronic devices typing has seems to be more popular.

✓ I prefer handwriting, even though with the rapid development of electronic devices typing has seemed to be more popular.

The verb after 'has' must be in the past participle form, not with an extra -s. 'has seems' mixes present perfect auxiliary with a simple present verb. Use 'has seemed' to form the present perfect passive idea that popularity increased over time.

× But I think handwriting can let me focus on what I am I am writing, so yeah.

✓ But I think handwriting helps me focus on what I am writing.

The original repeats 'I am' and uses 'can let me focus on' which is awkward. Use 'helps me focus on' for a natural result clause. Removing redundancy and simplifying the verb phrase fixes the sentence structure.

× I tie on laptop keyboard every day because I have a laptop which is bought by my dad and I think it is convenient because you can bring laptops to wherever you want, even at school, the dentistry or at home.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my dad bought me a laptop and I think it is convenient because you can take a laptop wherever you want, whether at school, the dentist's office, or at home.

Multiple errors: 'tie' is a wrong verb form — should be 'type' (spelling). 'Which is bought by my dad' is an awkward passive; use active past 'my dad bought me a laptop.' 'Bring laptops to wherever you want' is unnatural; use 'take a laptop wherever you want.' 'the dentistry' should be 'the dentist's office.' These corrections address verb choice, voice, and idiomatic prepositions.

× I was told to learn how to type on keyboard was when I was 10 years old.

✓ I was told to learn how to type on a keyboard when I was 10 years old.

The sentence has an extra 'was' and missing article 'a' before 'keyboard.' Remove the unnecessary 'was' and add 'a' to make a grammatically correct past passive statement. Keep past tense 'was told' to match the time reference.

× My dad really want me to learn how to type because he knew he knew that it is very important for me to learn how to type especially in this.

✓ My dad really wanted me to learn how to type because he knew that it was very important for me to learn, especially now.

Subject-verb agreement: 'dad really want' should be past 'wanted' to match 'he knew.' The repeated 'he knew' is redundant. 'It is very important for me to learn how to type especially in this' is unclear; change to 'it was very important for me to learn, especially now' for clarity and tense consistency.

× Oh, I downloaded an app to improve my typing.

✓ Oh, I downloaded an app to improve my typing.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense describing a completed action, so no change is necessary.

× You just need to uh, follow the uh, words which is demonstrated on the screen and you type them uh, as fast as possible and to make sure you type properly.

✓ You just need to follow the words that are shown on the screen and type them as fast as possible, making sure you type properly.

'Words which is demonstrated' has a number agreement error: 'words' (plural) requires 'are' not 'is.' Use 'that are shown' or 'which are shown.' Also simplify the coordinated verbs: 'you type them... and to make sure' should be parallel: 'and type them... making sure.' These changes fix subject-verb agreement and improve clause structure.