Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答有明确立场并给出理由，但存在语法错误、重复停顿和表达不够连贯的问题。建议： 1) 精简并避免重复（例如去掉多余的填充词“uh”和重复短语“I can I can”）。 2) 改进句子结构，先给主题句，再用连接词（because、for example、so）展开支持句。 3) 提供更具体细节（例如说明“unique style”具体是什么意思或如何帮助记忆）。 练习方法：先写出简短稿子并练习背诵，录音回听并改进流利度与连贯性。

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting because my handwriting is unique and helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I use different colours and layouts, which makes it easier to review and recall key points later.

Sugestão: 回答内容相关且理由清楚，但有语法错误和表达不流畅（如“I almost had my on the keyboard”不正确），以及填充词过多。建议： 1) 使用正确时态和词汇（例如 say “I use a laptop almost every day”）。 2) 用连词使句子更紧凑（because / so / therefore）。 3) 可补充一两项具体例子说明便利之处（如快捷的编辑、文件管理）。

Exemplo: I use a laptop almost every day because my school requires us to submit homework and assignments online. Typing on a laptop is faster for writing essays and makes it easy to save and organise files.

Sugestão: 回答提供了大致时间，但数词和表达混乱（“7:00 or 8 years old”不合适），时态不一致且重复填充词多。建议： 1) 用清晰的时间表达（e.g. “when I was seven or eight years old”）。 2) 统一时态（过去式描述过去的经历）。 3) 补充一两句具体情景（谁教的、用什么练习、最初遇到的困难）。

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about seven or eight years old. At that time my parents bought me a computer and I practised typing simple words and games to improve my speed.

Sugestão: 回答表达了练习重要性但结构单一、句子有时态和措辞问题，缺少具体方法。建议： 1) 用现在时说明常规方法（e.g. “I improve by practising regularly”）。 2) 列出具体练习方式（打字练习软件、定时练习、姿势和指法练习）。 3) 使用连接词使思路更连贯，并给出结果或效果（速度提高、错误减少）。

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising regularly with online typing exercises and timed tests. I also focus on correct finger placement and try to avoid looking at the keyboard, which has helped me increase speed and reduce mistakes.

× For example when I study I override by hand because it helps me.

✓ For example, when I study I write things by hand because it helps me.

原句使用了單詞“override”，在該語境下不合適。應使用“write (by hand)”表示“用手寫”。此外缺少逗號使從句和主句分隔不清。建議在表示用手寫作時使用“write (things) by hand”。

× I almost had my on the keyboard every day because my school usually require us to do homework and, uh, assignments on computers and typing is much more convenient and faster for writing essays and emails, so I use laptop every day.

✓ I almost have my hands on the keyboard every day because my school usually requires us to do homework and assignments on computers, and typing is much more convenient and faster for writing essays and emails, so I use a laptop every day.

原句時態和人稱有多處問題："almost had my on the keyboard" 不自然，正確表示習慣應用現在時"have my hands on the keyboard"或更簡潔的"I use the keyboard almost every day"。另外，主語"my school"為第三人稱單數，動詞應為"requires"而非"require"。最後名詞前需不定冠詞"a laptop"。建議梳理主語與動詞的一致性並補全遺漏的詞語。

× I guess it's about 7:00 or 8 years old because at that time I, uh, began study to use the computer and, uh, I have learned how to spell words.

✓ I guess I was about seven or eight years old because at that time I began to learn how to use the computer and I learned how to spell words.

此處涉及時態與不定式用法：描述過去經歷應使用過去時（I was, I began, I learned）。原句"began study to use" 結構錯誤，應為"began to learn"或"began learning"。另外數字用法"7:00"不合適，應為"seven"。建議使用清晰的過去時序並改用正確的不定式或動名詞結構。

× So, uh, at that time I'm trying to type on the keyboard.

✓ So, uh, at that time I was trying to type on the keyboard.

句中描述的是過去的情況，卻使用了現在進行時"I'm trying"。應將時態與上下文一致改為過去進行時"I was trying"。建議檢查時間標誌詞（"at that time"）以確定正確時態。

× I improved by typing because in my opinion, the more practice, the more efficient I will become and there's nothing else to do but practice to improve my competence.

✓ I improve by typing because, in my opinion, the more I practice, the more efficient I become, and there's nothing else to do but practice to improve my skills.

原句時態與搭配不一致：開頭應表達一般性事實用現在時"I improve"而非過去式"I improved"；短語"the more practice, the more efficient I will become" 中比較結構不完整，應為"the more I practice, the more efficient I become"（保持現在時）。此外"competence"可用更口語的"skills"。建議保持時態一致並使用完整的比較結構。

× Uh with pen on paper and I can I can use eraser to erase it when I review it.

✓ With a pen on paper, I can use an eraser to erase mistakes when I review my notes.

原句存在代詞與冠詞缺失以及重複"I can"問題：應加冠詞"a pen"和"an eraser"，並明確指代（如"mistakes"或"my notes"），避免重複。建議補全冠詞並明確被代詞所指稱的名詞。