Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a brief topic sentence explaining your preference, add one reason with a linking word, and avoid one-word answers. Try to use slightly more vocabulary to sound natural.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take handwritten notes in lectures, I recall the material more easily later on.

Sugestão: Keep the direct topic sentence but correct small grammar (every day as two words) and add one short supporting detail with a linking word to make the response more informative.

Exemplo: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I find it more convenient to carry around. In addition, its compact size makes it easy to use in different places like cafes or the library.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the time, then use one linking word to give a concise supporting detail. Avoid redundant phrasing such as “so they taught me everything” and correct grammar.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer lessons. At that time, the teacher taught us basic typing techniques and proper finger placement.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then give a specific method with a linking word. Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea twice; instead explain one concrete practice you use to improve speed and accuracy.

Exemplo: I monitor my words per minute and practise with online typing tests to raise my speed. For instance, I do ten-minute timed drills three times a week and focus on accuracy before pushing for higher speed.

× I type on a laptop keyboard everyday.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

The student used 'everyday' (an adjective meaning ordinary) instead of the adverbial phrase 'every day' (meaning each day). Use 'every day' when referring to frequency. Also ensure a space between 'every' and 'day'.

× I learned it when I was in a school so I had a computer period so they taught me everything how to type on a keyboard.

✓ I learned it when I was in school because we had a computer class and the teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard.

The original sentence has awkward connectors and incorrect phrasing: 'in a school' is acceptable but 'in school' is more natural; 'computer period' is nonstandard in English—use 'computer class'; 'so they taught me everything how to type' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'because' to show reason and use 'the teacher taught me how to type' or 'they taught me how to type.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I count my words per minute and then I try to increase it by increasing my typing speed.

✓ I count my words per minute and then I try to increase it by improving my typing speed.

The pronoun 'it' is vague here; specify what you want to increase (words per minute) or rephrase. Using 'increasing my typing speed' is repetitive; 'improving my typing speed' is clearer and avoids awkward repetition. This corrects word choice and clarity.