Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer Taiping since it's much faster than handwriting and it's easier to add edit mistakes. For example, when I read emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete what I wrote from and move sentences.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I tap on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to do a lot of assignments and type them up on my computer. I usually hand my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and save times.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
About two years ago when I first got a computer, I started learning how to type on a keyboard. I practiced a lot online with typing software and I tried to chatting with my friends on computer with my keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I believe practicing is the best way to improve typing. I practice typing every day using online typing tests and try chatting with my friends online, which improved my typing speed and the increased accuracy.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 注意发音与拼写(例如“Taiping”应为“typing”),同时回答应更直接与自然。第一句可先给出明确主题句,然后用1-2个简短具体原因支持,避免重复和语法错误。可以用连接词如“because”, “so”, “for example”。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is much faster and makes editing easy. For example, when I write emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete or move sentences, so my writing becomes clearer.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 句子总体清晰,但有小错误(例如“tap”不自然,复数/时态一致问题“save times”应为“saves time”)。建议用更自然的动词(type/use)并注意主谓一致,删除冗余,控制在最多五句内。
Exemplo: I use my laptop keyboard every day because I have to type many assignments. I usually submit my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and saves time.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 72.0Sugestão: 回答时间点明确,内容具体,但有语法问题(例如“tried to chatting”应为“tried chatting”或“started chatting”)。建议简化句子并使用连词如“so”或“and”连接细节,确保动词形式正确。
Exemplo: I learned to type about two years ago when I first got a computer. I practiced a lot with online typing software and chatted with friends on the computer to improve my speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 观点清楚但有时态和搭配错误(“improved”应与现在完成或现在时一致,且“the increased accuracy”不自然)。建议用现在时描述习惯性动作,提供更具体细节(例如每天练习多少分钟、使用哪些网站),并用连接词如“so”或“which helps”。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day with online typing tests for about 20 minutes. I also chat with friends online, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer Taiping since it's much faster than handwriting and it's easier to add edit mistakes.
✓ I prefer typing since it's much faster than handwriting and it's easier to add or edit mistakes.
句中有两个问题:1) 把“Taiping”应为“typing”(拼写错误,属于词形错误但符合“形容词或副词使用不当”条目范围内的用词问题);2) “add edit mistakes” 结构不正确,缺少连词“or”以连接两个动词“add”和“edit”。建议在并列动词之间加连词或用不定式短语,确保表达清晰。
× For example, when I read emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete what I wrote from and move sentences.
✓ For example, when I read emails or essays on a computer, I can quickly delete what I wrote and move sentences.
原句中“delete what I wrote from”中多了介词“from”导致句子结构不完整,错误地影响了动词短语的过去分词用法。应删除多余的“from”。建议检查介词是否必要,并确保动词短语连贯。
× I tap on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to do a lot of assignments and type them up on my computer.
✓ I tap on my laptop keyboard every day because I need to do a lot of assignments and type them up on my computer.
该句本身语法基本正确;但后文有相关并列谓语时,注意主语一致性(I ... need ... and type)无需第三人称变化。此处无需改动,只需注意人称和动词一致。
× I usually hand my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and save times.
✓ I usually hand my work to my teacher electronically, which is more convenient and saves time.
错误有两处:1) “save times” 应为单数“saves time”——动词需要与先行词“which(referring to the electronic submission)”一致,故用第三人称单数动词“saves”;2) “time” 在此不可数,不能用复数“times”。建议记住常用短语“save time”。
× About two years ago when I first got a computer, I started learning how to type on a keyboard.
✓ About two years ago, when I first got a computer, I started learning how to type on a keyboard.
句子本身时态使用正确(过去式),只是缺少逗号以分隔时间状语从句,使结构更清晰。建议在时间状语后加逗号以提高可读性。
× I practiced a lot online with typing software and I tried to chatting with my friends on computer with my keyboard.
✓ I practiced a lot online with typing software and I tried chatting with my friends on the computer with my keyboard.
错误点:1) “tried to chatting” 是动词+不定式与动名词混用错误,应为“tried chatting”或“tried to chat”; 2) “on computer” 缺冠词,正确为“on the computer”。建议掌握动词后接不定式或动名词的规律,并注意冠词用法。
× I believe practicing is the best way to improve typing.
✓ I believe practising is the best way to improve typing.
句子语法正确,但英式拼写“practising”与美式“practicing”可根据考试偏好选择。此处无需改动语法,仅作拼写风格提示。
× I practice typing every day using online typing tests and try chatting with my friends online, which improved my typing speed and the increased accuracy.
✓ I practice typing every day using online typing tests and try chatting with my friends online, which improves my typing speed and increases my accuracy.
原句在从句动词时态和形式上不一致:主句为一般现在时,定语从句却用了过去式“improved”,并且短语“the increased accuracy”结构不自然。应把从句改为一般现在时“improves”和并列谓语“increases my accuracy”。建议保持时态一致,并用并列动词短语表达两个结果。