Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer handwriting than typing because I I like writing on paper with pencil. Pesos. Feeling right is.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
No, but I I often type on my iPad when I. Make a report for my school's task. I don't like typing so it was difficult for me.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned that when I was in elementary school. I typed on school's laptop. In the information subject.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I'm not good at typing now, but I used to practice typing. Soft like sushi, the. So I practiced hard.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 発音や文法の誤りを直し、回答を明確で自然な構造に整えましょう。まずトピック文で直接答え、次に理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べ、冗長な繰り返しを避けます。例えば「I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing on paper.」のように簡潔に表現してください。さらに“prefer”は“to”と組み合わせて使う(prefer A to B)か、“prefer V-ing”を使う練習をしてください。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing on paper. For instance, when I write notes with a pencil, I remember information better, so I find it more effective for studying.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答を一文で明確にし、続けて具体例と理由をつけてください。不要な繰り返し(I I)を避け、時制と語順を正しく使いましょう。また“every day”に対する否定は“not every day”など適切に表現します。例えば「I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I usually type reports on my iPad for school, but I find typing difficult.」の形を練習してください。
Exemplo: I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I usually type reports on my iPad for school. However, I find typing difficult because I'm slower and make more mistakes than when I write by hand.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: もっと自然な一文で時期を明示し、続けて場所や授業の詳細をつけましょう。現在形と過去形の使い分けに注意し、冠詞(a/the)や所有格(school's→my school's)を正しく使います。例えば「I learned to type in elementary school during my computer class.」のようにまとめる練習をしてください。
Exemplo: I learned to type in elementary school during my computer class. At that time, we used the school's laptops and practiced basic typing exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答を論理的に整理し、改善方法を具体的に述べてください。意味不明なフレーズは避け、現在の状況と過去の行動を明確に区別します。練習方法(オンライン練習、1日何分練習するなど)や成果を示すと説得力が増します。例えば「I am still improving my typing by practicing 20 minutes a day with online typing lessons.」のように具体的な方法と頻度を述べてください。
Exemplo: I'm still not very good at typing, but I am improving by practicing for 20 minutes each day with online typing lessons. As a result, my speed and accuracy have gradually increased.
× I prefer handwriting than typing because I I like writing on paper with pencil.
✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I like writing on paper with a pencil.
Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Remove duplicate 'I'. Include the article 'a' before 'pencil'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer X to Y' and proofread for repeated words. Grammar problem type ID:16
× Pesos.
✓ (remove utterance as it is unclear)
This single word 'Pesos' is unclear and not a pronoun; likely a speech error. Suggestion: Omit unclear fragments or restate clearly, e.g. 'I feel it is right.' Grammar problem type ID:12
× Feeling right is.
✓ It feels right.
Original word order is incorrect and lacks a clear subject-verb structure. Use 'it feels right' to express a general feeling. Suggestion: Ensure sentences have subject and verb in the correct order. Grammar problem type ID:26
× No, but I I often type on my iPad when I. Make a report for my school's task.
✓ No, but I often type on my iPad when I make a report for a school assignment.
Remove duplicate 'I'. Combine broken sentence fragments into one sentence. Use 'make a report' with 'when I make a report' and replace 'school's task' with 'a school assignment' for natural English. Suggestion: Avoid unnecessary pauses and repeated words; keep verb tense consistent. Grammar problem type ID:12
× I don't like typing so it was difficult for me.
✓ I don't like typing, so it is difficult for me.
Tense inconsistency: 'don't like' is present, so follow with present 'is difficult' rather than past 'was difficult'. Suggestion: Match tenses when describing current preferences and their effects. Grammar problem type ID:6
× I learned that when I was in elementary school.
✓ I learned it when I was in elementary school.
Missing direct object: 'learned that' is vague here. Add 'it' to clarify what was learned. Tense 'learned' is correct. Suggestion: Include objects after 'learn' when necessary. Grammar problem type ID:5
× I typed on school's laptop.
✓ I typed on the school's laptop.
Missing definite article 'the' before 'school's laptop'. Use 'the school's laptop' to specify the laptop belonging to the school. Suggestion: Use articles to specify nouns. Grammar problem type ID:22
× In the information subject.
✓ In the information class.
Awkward noun phrase 'information subject' is literal translation. In English, use 'class' or 'subject' with clearer structure: 'in the information class' or 'in my information class'. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'class' or 'subject' and include possessive if needed. Grammar problem type ID:26
× I'm not good at typing now, but I used to practice typing.
✓ I'm not good at typing now, but I used to practice it.
'Practice typing' is acceptable, but using 'it' avoids repetition. Both tenses are fine: present state and past habit. Suggestion: Use pronouns to avoid repetition and keep clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6
× Soft like sushi, the.
✓ (remove utterance as it is unclear)
This fragment 'Soft like sushi, the.' is unintelligible and lacks grammatical structure. Probably a speech error. Suggestion: Omit unclear fragments or ask speaker to repeat. Grammar problem type ID:26
× So I practiced hard.
✓ So I practiced hard.
This sentence is grammatically correct: past tense 'practiced' matches the context of a past habit. Suggestion: None needed. Grammar problem type ID:5