Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid fillers and repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., convenient, efficient, portable) and correct small grammar points (e.g., omit unnecessary words). Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, I can edit text quickly and use cloud storage to access documents anywhere, which is especially useful when I travel. Therefore, I usually type notes on my laptop or phone.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Begin with a direct statement, then give a brief reason and one supporting detail. Correct minor errors ("more faster" → "faster") and remove filler words like "uh". Keep answers within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I type on a laptop every day because I own a MacBook and use it for school and work. It is faster and more convenient than a desktop for me, as I can carry it around and work in different places.

Sugestão: Be precise and avoid confusing or incorrect words. Give a clear time reference and a short supporting detail. Replace vague phrases like "I think" with a confident phrase if you remember, and correct phrases like "desk desktop" and "when I was a people."

Exemplo: I learned to type in middle school when my parents bought a desktop computer. I practiced regularly with typing exercises in class, which helped me build speed and accuracy.

Sugestão: Give a clear method and specific examples of practice. Avoid contradicting phrases like "I can't say that I try" followed by advice. Use correct vocabulary ("keys" not "bottoms") and concise linking words. Provide one or two concrete strategies (online tests, touch typing software, daily practice).

Exemplo: I improve my typing through daily practice and online exercises. For example, I use a typing tutor website for 15 minutes each day to increase speed, and I also practice touch-typing so I can adapt to different keyboards and layouts.

× I prefer typing because personally I think it's more convenient to just push the buttons and you, you don't even need something like pen or pencil, you know?

✓ I prefer typing because I think it's more convenient to just press the keys; you don't even need a pen or pencil.

Pronoun 'you' used informally and repetitively; change to first person 'I' for consistent viewpoint. 'Push the buttons' is less natural than 'press the keys'. 'Something like pen or pencil' should use the article 'a' before singular count nouns and parallel structure 'a pen or pencil'. Remove filler repetition for clarity.

× Of course I uh, type on a laptop every day because, uh, since I have a new MacBook, I uh, use it every day. So for me it is more faster to type something and.

✓ Of course I type on a laptop every day because I have a new MacBook, so I use it every day. For me it is faster to type on it.

Remove unnecessary fillers. 'More faster' is ungrammatical because 'faster' is already comparative; use 'faster' alone. End the sentence with a complete clause and use 'on it' to indicate the laptop. Verb forms 'type' and 'use' are correct for first person present.

× I think it was in middle school when my parents bought me a new desk desktop and I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a people.

✓ I think it was in middle school when my parents bought me a new desktop computer, and I learned how to type then.

'Desk desktop' is redundant; use 'desktop computer'. The phrase 'when I was a people' is ungrammatical and unclear; replace with 'then' to indicate the same time. Simplify sentence structure to avoid repetition.

× I can't say that I I try to improve it, but regular practice makes perfect. So even if you have another keyboard, another of another language, it's easy to remember in which in which locate location the bottoms is are.

✓ I can't say that I try to improve it, but regular practice makes perfect. Even if you use a keyboard for another language, it's easy to remember where the keys are located.

Remove repeated filler 'I'. 'Another of another language' is incorrect; use 'a keyboard for another language'. 'In which in which locate location' is redundant and wrong; use 'where the keys are located'. 'Bottoms' is incorrect for keys; use 'keys'. Subject-verb agreement fixed with 'keys are located'.