Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
In my eyes, typing is more comfortable than handwriting because I think a keyboard is very convenient for you. Uh, when you don't have more money to pay the pencil.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I always tape on the laptop keyboard because I think it is very convenient and comfortable and I don't need to pay more money for the desktop. I think I don't need that.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I think the time I type on keyboard is for 10 years ago because, uh, when I was, uh, eight years old, I want to play computer games and then I start to learn how to type on the keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think you can use some typing website because it is professional on this typing skills so I think it can quickly to increase your. Frequency on typing.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接、流畅并提供具体原因。注意语法和用词,避免无关信息(例如“钱买铅笔”)。可用一至两句说明偏好,再用一到两句举具体例子或原因,并使用连接词如“because”、“so”来衔接。
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, typing helps me edit and organize my notes quickly, and I can type on different devices which saves time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答应更准确并去掉重复。说明选择笔记本的具体原因(便携、习惯、功能等),用一两个连接词连接原因,最多四句。避免语法错误(例如“tape”应为“type”)。
Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient. I can work anywhere, and the laptop has all the features I need, so I don't use a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答要用正确时态并更简洁。直接给出时间点并解释原因,使用连接词如“when”或“because”。避免口头语填充(uh)。
Exemplo: I learned to type about ten years ago, when I was eight. I started practising because I wanted to play computer games and needed to use the keyboard accurately.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 提供更具体的方法和步骤,并用连词使句子连贯。可以列举一个或两个具体资源或练习方法,说明效果和频率。注意语法(如“increase your typing speed”)。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising on online typing websites like TypingClub or 10FastFingers. I practise for 20 minutes a day focusing on accuracy first, then speed, which has helped me type faster and with fewer mistakes.
× In my eyes, typing is more comfortable than handwriting because I think a keyboard is very convenient for you.
✓ In my eyes, typing is more comfortable than handwriting because a keyboard is very convenient.
问题类型:代词使用不当。这里的原句用“for you”不合上下文,学生是在陈述自己的观点,不需要指向听者。改为省略“for you”或使用“for me”。建议:当表达个人观点时,用“for me”或直接省略不必要的代词。
× Uh, when you don't have more money to pay the pencil.
✓ Uh, when you don't have much money to buy a pencil.
问题类型:介词和搭配使用错误。原句中“have more money to pay the pencil”不符合英语习惯,应使用“have much money”表示钱不多,且买东西用动词“buy”而不是“pay the pencil”。建议:表示买东西时用“buy + 物品”,表示不足钱用“don't have much money”。
× I always tape on the laptop keyboard because I think it is very convenient and comfortable and I don't need to pay more money for the desktop.
✓ I always type on the laptop keyboard because I think it is very convenient and comfortable and I don't need to pay more money for a desktop.
问题类型:动词现在分词/拼写错误以及冠词使用。原句中“tape”应为“type”(拼写错误),且“pay more money for the desktop”应使用不定冠词“a desktop”表示一台台式机。建议:注意动词拼写并在可数名词单数前使用不定冠词。
× I think I don't need that.
✓ I think I don't need it.
问题类型:代词使用不当。原句用“that”语义不清且不自然,指代前文“a desktop”应使用宾格代词“it”。建议:代词指代最近的名词时用“it”。
× I think the time I type on keyboard is for 10 years ago because, uh, when I was, uh, eight years old, I want to play computer games and then I start to learn how to type on the keyboard.
✓ I think I started typing on the keyboard about 10 years ago because when I was eight years old I wanted to play computer games, so I started to learn how to type on the keyboard.
问题类型:过去时使用错误。句中应使用过去时描述过去发生的动作:用“started”而不是“start”,用“wanted”而不是“want”。此外,“for 10 years ago”应为“about 10 years ago”。建议:描述过去的具体事件要用过去式,时间短语如“about 10 years ago”放在句中。
× I think you can use some typing website because it is professional on this typing skills so I think it can quickly to increase your. Frequency on typing.
✓ I think you can use some typing websites because they are professional for typing skills, so I think they can quickly increase your typing speed.
问题类型:情态动词和搭配使用错误。原句中“it is professional on this typing skills”搭配错误,需用复数“websites”并用“are professional for typing skills”。“increase your. Frequency on typing”语序和词汇错误,应为“increase your typing speed”。建议:注意主谓一致(websites→they/are),使用固定搭配“increase one's typing speed”。