Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 발음과 유창성을 향상시키기 위해 불필요한 망설임(umm, uh)을 줄이고 문장을 더 명확하게 구조화하세요. 질문에 바로 답하고 이유를 한두 문장으로 간결하게 설명하세요. 예를 들어 주어와 동사의 일치, 관사 사용(“a”, “the”)을 확인하고 중복 표현(‘on the my on my’)을 피하세요. 마지막으로 시제와 전치사 사용을 바로잡으세요.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because I am currently researching my mechanical engineering thesis and I write it directly on my desktop. Typing is faster for organizing my ideas and editing drafts.

Sugestão: 응답을 더 깔끔하게 하고 반복을 줄이세요. ‘as I said’ 같은 표현은 한 번만 사용하거나 생략해도 됩니다. 또한 어법 오류(‘a my’, ‘used red top’)를 고쳐 정확한 단어를 사용하세요. 매일 사용하는 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이면 점수가 올라갑니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I use both my desktop and laptop every day. I do this because I am writing a thesis and often switch devices for research, writing, and proofreading.

Sugestão: 대답을 회피하지 말고 가능한 한 구체적으로 응답하세요. 기억이 분명하지 않다면 대략적인 시점(예: 학교 시절, 대학 입학 이후)을 말하고 현재의 연습 방법이나 발전 과정을 덧붙이세요. 문법(복수형, 시제)과 불필요한 감탄사('Yup')를 줄이세요.

Exemplo: I don't remember the exact time, but I think I learned the basics of typing during high school. Since then I have practiced by typing assignments and articles regularly.

Sugestão: 방법을 구체적이고 체계적으로 설명하세요. 단순히 ‘매일 한다’는 말 대신 연습 방법(예: 타이핑 연습 사이트, 속도와 정확도 목표, 교정 방법)을 제시하면 좋습니다. 중복 표현과 문법 오류('type typing', 'make less mistake')를 고쳐 자연스럽게 말하세요.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing every day with online exercises that focus on accuracy and speed. I set small goals, like increasing my words-per-minute by two each week, and I review mistakes to avoid repeating them.

× I prefer, umm, typing because, uh, recently I I'm doing on research about the mechanical engineering thesis and I just write it down on the my on my desktop and typing.

✓ I prefer typing because recently I'm doing research for my mechanical engineering thesis and I just write it on my desktop.

Error type: Verb in the present participle form and other issues (extra prepositions/articles and redundant words). 'Doing on research' is incorrect; use 'doing research' or 'researching'. 'About the mechanical engineering thesis' is better as 'for my mechanical engineering thesis' to show purpose and possession. Remove extra 'the' and duplicated 'my'. 'Write it down on the my on my desktop and typing' is wordy and ungrammatical; use 'write it on my desktop'. Suggestion: Use 'I'm researching' or 'I'm doing research' and keep sentence concise. Note: This correction adheres to the allowed problem types by fixing the present participle usage and related structure.

× Yes, I type on a my desktop and laptop keyboard also every day because as I said I I'm doing research to write a thesis or paper so I used red top every day.

✓ Yes, I use my desktop and laptop keyboards every day because, as I said, I'm doing research to write a thesis or paper, so I use them every day.

Error type: Incorrect prepositions and article usage. 'Type on a my desktop' should be 'use my desktop' or 'type on my desktop'; remove incorrect article 'a' before 'my'. 'Laptop keyboard also every day' word order is wrong; place adverbs appropriately. 'I used red top' is unclear and likely a mishearing; assumed meaning 'I use them every day'. Suggestion: Use consistent verbs ('use' or 'type on') and correct article/pronoun placement.

× Actually I don't have a memories about when I learned typing, I just practicing typing myself and Yup.

✓ Actually I don't have any memories about when I learned to type; I just practiced typing by myself.

Error type: Past tense and article/verb form issues. 'Don't have a memories' should be 'don't have any memories' (article/quantifier). 'Learned typing' is better as 'learned to type'. 'I just practicing' is incorrect verb form; past 'practiced' fits the past time reference. Suggestion: Use 'any' with plural 'memories', use infinitive 'to type' after 'learned', and use past tense 'practiced'.

× Based on my experience, I can improve my typing efficiently and faster by type typing it down every day so I can get used to typing and.

✓ Based on my experience, I can improve my typing more efficiently by typing every day so I can get used to it and make fewer mistakes.

Error type: Verb + -ing form and comparative/adverb placement. 'By type typing it down' is incorrect and repetitive; use 'by typing every day'. 'Efficiently and faster' is awkward; use 'more efficiently' or 'faster'. 'Make less mistake' should be 'make fewer mistakes' because 'mistakes' is countable. Suggestion: Use gerund 'typing' after 'by', use 'more efficiently' for comparison, and 'fewer mistakes' for countable nouns.