Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and include a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid redundancy like 'typing... before typing'. Use one clear topic sentence and one supporting detail.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it gives me time to think before sending messages, which helps me express my thoughts more clearly.

Sugestão: Remove filler words and be slightly more specific about why the phone is convenient (portability, speed, apps). Keep it to one topic sentence plus one detail using a linking word.

Exemplo: I always type on my phone because it is more convenient—it’s portable and quicker for messaging and using apps on the go.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and tighten the response. State the time, then give one clear reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating 'phone' and use accurate verb tenses.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was about seven because I had a phone then, so I’ve become more efficient at tapping on a screen than using a computer keyboard.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: give a clear method, a reason, and a brief example. Use linking words and correct grammar; avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly, because frequent practice builds speed and accuracy; for example, I spend 20 minutes each day completing typing exercises and texting.

× I prefer typing because it allows me to express my feelings clearly by thinking a bit before typing or sending my message to someone.

✓ I prefer typing because it allows me to express my feelings clearly by thinking a bit before typing or sending my messages to someone.

Plural of 'message' needed when referring to messages in general. This is a quantifier/number issue but fits verb + -ing context because 'typing' and 'sending' are correctly -ing forms. Change 'my message' to 'my messages' for natural plural reference when speaking generally.

× I always type on my phone's keyboard because it's more convenient for me than typing on a computer or laptop's, uh, keyboard.

✓ I always type on my phone's keyboard because it's more convenient for me than typing on a computer or laptop keyboard.

Do not use possessive 'laptop's' when comparing devices in this structure. Use 'laptop keyboard' (noun + noun) or 'a laptop's keyboard'. Removing the possessive makes the comparison grammatical and natural.

× I know typing on a keyboard since I was younger because I had my phone when I was seven years old.

✓ I have known how to type on a keyboard since I was young because I had my phone when I was seven years old.

Use present perfect ('have known') with 'since' to indicate an action or state beginning in the past and continuing to the present. Also change 'know typing' to 'know how to type' and 'younger' to 'young' for natural phrasing.

× Because of this reason, I'm more professional tapping on the phone because I mainly use my phone instead of computer or laptop.

✓ Because of this, I'm better at typing on the phone because I mainly use my phone instead of a computer or laptop.

'Because of this reason' is wordy; 'because of this' is natural. 'More professional tapping on the phone' is incorrect—use 'better at typing on the phone'. Include articles 'a computer or laptop' when speaking generally.

× I think I can improve my typing by typing a lot obviously because when people type a lot and they tend to motivate more and consistent in their work.

✓ I think I can improve my typing by typing a lot, obviously, because when people type a lot they tend to be more motivated and more consistent in their work.

After 'tend to' use base form or be + past participle. Use 'tend to be more motivated' and 'more consistent'. Also add commas and remove redundant 'and' to improve clarity.

× So when you determine it and cons consistent in your work, you can achieve your goal.

✓ So when you are determined and consistent in your work, you can achieve your goals.

'Determine it' is wrong; use 'are determined'. 'cons consistent' is a typo; use 'consistent'. Use plural 'goals' or keep singular consistently; 'goals' fits general advice. This fixes subject-verb and adjective use to form a correct clause.