Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Слишком много пауз, заполнителей (uh) и грамматические ошибки снижают ясность. Дайте прямое утверждение, затем 1–2 конкретных причины с примером или кратким сравнением. Избегайте повторов и сокращайте до 2–3 предложений.

Exemplo: I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient for sending messages. For example, I can correct mistakes quickly and use shortcuts, which saves time compared to handwriting.

Sugestão: Ответ смещённый и не завершён; есть много пауз и плохая структура. Начните с прямого ответа (Yes/No + which), затем дайте 1–2 конкретные причины. Заканчивайте завершённым предложением; не вставляйте нерелевантные фразы про почерк.

Exemplo: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is portable and faster for most tasks. I rarely use a desktop since I don’t have one at home and I prefer working on the go.

Sugestão: Грамматика (времена, согласование) и формулировки нечеткие. Стройте ответ с указанием времени, краткой истории и результата. Используйте правильные формы глаголов и избегайте разговорных вставок (whoa, like).

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was a child by watching my brother play computer games. I became curious about his speed, so I practised with him and gradually improved my typing skills.

Sugestão: Ответ слишком короткий и содержит ошибку («leg»). Дайте конкретный метод и пример практики, используйте связку причинно-следственную. Упомяните частоту и инструмент (например, онлайн-тренажёры) для полноты.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising daily with online typing tutors for about 15–20 minutes. This helps me increase my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer typing just because I think it's, uh, much faster and convenient way to send the message.

✓ I prefer typing just because I think it's a much faster and more convenient way to send messages.

The sentence needs parallel comparatives and correct article use. 'Much faster and convenient' should be 'much faster and more convenient' to make the adjectives parallel, and 'a' is required before 'much' because 'way' is a singular count noun. Also use the plural 'messages' for general statements. Suggestion: use parallel structure with 'more' before the second adjective and include the article 'a'.

× And if compare handwriting, uh, it just can help you with, uh, writing skills.

✓ And if you compare handwriting, it can help you with your writing skills.

The original lacks the subject 'you' in the conditional clause and misplaces 'can' after 'just'. Also possessive 'your' is needed with 'writing skills'. Suggestion: include the subject, place modal 'can' before the verb, and use 'your' to indicate possession.

× Will I type on a laptop keyboard every day just because as I mentioned before, uh, typing by laptop it's much easier and faster way to send a message.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because, as I mentioned before, typing on a laptop is a much easier and faster way to send messages.

The question asked present habit, so use present simple rather than future 'Will I'. Also 'typing by laptop' is awkward; use 'typing on a laptop'. Insert article 'a' before 'much easier' and pluralize 'messages'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and correct preposition 'on'.

× Uh, the reason why uh, I don't type on a desktop because my handwriting is not.

✓ I don't type on a desktop because my handwriting is not good.

The clause 'the reason why' is redundant before 'because'; choose one. The sentence ends incompletely; add the adjective 'good' to complete the thought. Suggestion: simplify to 'I don't type on a desktop because my handwriting is not good.' or 'The reason I don't type on a desktop is that my handwriting is not good.'

× When I was a child I observed my brother how he was playing the game on computer.

✓ When I was a child I watched my brother play games on the computer.

Use 'watched' or 'observed' followed by the base verb without 'how' for this meaning: 'watch someone do something'. 'Play games' is more natural than 'playing the game', and 'on the computer' requires the article 'the'. Suggestion: use 'watch' + object + base verb and correct article use.

× So after that I were curious that how he could type faster.

✓ So after that I was curious about how he could type so fast.

Subject-verb agreement in past tense requires 'I was' not 'I were'. Also 'curious about how' is the correct preposition and word order; 'so fast' is more idiomatic than 'faster' in this context. Suggestion: use 'was' for first person past and 'curious about how'.

× So because of him I learned it like.

✓ So because of him I learned to type.

The phrase 'learned it like' is incomplete and ungrammatical. You need the verb 'to type' as the object of 'learned'. Suggestion: state the skill learned explicitly: 'I learned to type.'

× Well, I would say by practicing leg uh, regularly.

✓ Well, I would say by practicing regularly.

The word 'leg' appears to be a mistake or filler; remove it. 'By practicing regularly' correctly uses the gerund after 'by' to indicate the method of improvement. Suggestion: omit extraneous words and use the gerund form after 'by'.