Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
It depends on the situations. If I have to choose, I prefer topping because my handwriting it isn't very neat and it's hard for others to read. For example, when I take note in lecture or write emails, I always try because.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I usually type on my laptop every day. Because now I'm a student so when I have some homework I always use my laptop to do it.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to type at school when I was a child because typing lessons are the lesson that everyone have to study in, so most people can drive quickly.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
My typing was improved when I'm at university that I have to write many essay as a homework, so I think too typing a lot and more every day is the way.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: ปรับความถูกต้องของไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ (เช่น 'topping' → 'typing') และตอบให้ชัดเจนตามโครงสร้าง: เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงๆ ตามด้วยเหตุผล และยกตัวอย่างโดยใช้คำเชื่อมอย่างเหมาะสม ลดความซ้ำซ้อนและเล่นคำผิด โดยจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค
Exemplo: I prefer typing because my handwriting is often messy and hard to read. For example, I usually take notes during lectures and send emails, so typing is faster and clearer. Because of this, I feel more confident sharing my work with others.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: เชื่อมประโยคด้วยคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมและแก้ไวยากรณ์ของประโยครอง (หลีกเลี่ยงการใช้ประโยคเริ่มด้วย 'Because' แบบแยก ประโยคควรเชื่อมเป็นหนึ่งเดียว) เพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้นๆ ที่เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ประเภทงานที่ทำหรือโปรแกรมที่ใช้
Exemplo: I usually type on my laptop every day because I use it to write essays and complete assignments. I often use Word or Google Docs for my schoolwork, which makes editing and saving my work easy.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: แก้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ (เช่น 'drive' → 'type quickly') และทำให้รายละเอียดชัดเจนขึ้น ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อนำเสนอเหตุผล และอย่าใส่ข้อมูลที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง ควรเป็นประโยคที่กระชับไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค
Exemplo: I learned to type at school when I was a child because typing classes were part of the curriculum. As a result, most students learned how to type quickly and accurately from an early age.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: ปรับไวยากรณ์ (เวลาและคำช่วย), แก้รูปประโยคให้ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายวิธีการปรับปรุงเป็นขั้นตอนหรือเทคนิคเฉพาะ เช่น ฝึกพิมพ์วันละ X นาที ใช้โปรแกรมฝึกพิมพ์ และตรวจสอบความถูกต้องของงาน
Exemplo: My typing improved at university because I had to write many essays for homework. To get better, I practiced typing every day, used online typing tutors to increase speed, and focused on accuracy by proofreading my work.
× It depends on the situations.
✓ It depends on the situation.
The plural 'situations' is acceptable in some contexts but here the idiomatic expression is 'depend on the situation' (singular). Use singular when speaking about a general condition. Suggestion: use 'situation' or rephrase 'in different situations'. Grammar problem type ID:1
× If I have to choose, I prefer topping because my handwriting it isn't very neat and it's hard for others to read.
✓ If I have to choose, I prefer typing because my handwriting isn't very neat and it's hard for others to read.
The word 'topping' is a misspelling; correct form is 'typing'. Remove the extra subject 'it' in 'my handwriting it isn't' because it creates a subject duplication. Suggestion: proofread for typos and avoid redundant pronouns. Grammar problem type ID:26
× For example, when I take note in lecture or write emails, I always try because.
✓ For example, when I take notes in lectures or write emails, I always try to type instead.
Missing object and incomplete clause 'I always try because' makes the sentence unfinished. 'Take note' should be plural 'take notes'; 'lecture' plural 'lectures' fits general habit. Complete the idea by adding 'to type instead.' Suggestion: ensure clauses are completed and use plural nouns for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:26
× I usually type on my laptop every day.
✓ I usually type on my laptop every day.
This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Explanation: subject-verb agreement and tense are appropriate for routine action. Grammar problem type ID:6
× Because now I'm a student so when I have some homework I always use my laptop to do it.
✓ Now I'm a student, so when I have homework I always use my laptop to do it.
Starting with 'Because now I'm a student so' creates redundancy and awkward linkage. Remove 'Because' at the start and keep 'so' to show cause. Also 'some homework' is unnecessary; simply 'homework' is preferred. Suggestion: avoid using both 'because' and 'so' together; choose one. Grammar problem type ID:16
× I learned to type at school when I was a child because typing lessons are the lesson that everyone have to study in, so most people can drive quickly.
✓ I learned to type at school when I was a child because typing lessons were classes that everyone had to take, so most people can type quickly.
Tense inconsistency: 'are' should be 'were' to match past time 'when I was a child'. 'The lesson that everyone have to study in' has subject-verb agreement error: use 'everyone had to take'. 'Drive quickly' is incorrect verb; likely meant 'type quickly'. Suggestion: match past tense across clauses and use correct verbs ('take classes', 'type quickly'). Grammar problem type ID:5
× My typing was improved when I'm at university that I have to write many essay as a homework, so I think too typing a lot and more every day is the way.
✓ My typing improved when I was at university because I had to write many essays as homework, so I think practicing typing more every day was the way to improve.
Mixing tenses: 'was improved' is passive and awkward; use active past 'improved'. 'I'm at university' should be past 'I was at university'. 'Many essay' needs plural 'essays'. 'As a homework' should be 'as homework' (no article). 'Too typing a lot and more every day' is ungrammatical; use 'practicing typing more every day'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use plural nouns, and prefer active voice and correct collocations ('as homework', 'practice typing'). Grammar problem type ID:6}]}ичә}<!-- Note: The last characters after JSON are accidental and may be ignored -->