Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer the handwriting because in our child the typing and the computer haven't very famous in the society. So from the I was a child, we should write the words and sentence in the paper.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I often tap on laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient for the laptop. We can take it to everywhere but the desktop, we can't take it so and we can bring the laptop to the classroom. It's very convenient.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. Our teachers particularly set on UH classes, and of course she taught us knowledge to type on the keyboard.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I find a website that can offer the practice for me, that I can practice the typing skills, we can follow the sentence and the speed on the website to type the letters and to improve my skills.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 答案需更直接、自然并纠正语法与表达不清的问题。建议先用一句话明确回答(I prefer handwriting),然后给出一到两条具体原因并用连接词衔接。注意时态和单数复数(e.g., when I was a child),以及词汇搭配(become common / popular)。避免冗长或重复。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting. When I was a child, computers and typing were not common in my area, so we practiced writing words and sentences on paper a lot.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 64.0Sugestão: 答案应更简洁并使用恰当搭配(e.g., use a laptop keyboard / take it anywhere)。开头直接回应问题,然后用1–2个具体原因支持,并加一个连接词替换重复表达。注意避免重复“it's very convenient”。
Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable. For example, I can carry my laptop to class or to a café, which makes typing much more convenient than using a desktop.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 68.0Sugestão: 回答需要更自然、流畅并修正不清楚的短语。先简短回答时间(when I was in primary school),然后用一两句说明学习方式或课堂环境,使用正确表达(e.g., computer/typing classes, the teacher showed us how to touch-type)。避免词序或词汇错误。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My teacher organised computer classes where she taught us basic typing techniques and encouraged regular practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答应更简洁并使用准确表达(e.g., I use a website that offers typing practice)。先直接回答(I use an online typing website),然后具体说明如何练习(timed lessons, speed tests, exercises)并给出结果或频率。注意语法(found → find/found, offer → offers)。
Exemplo: I use an online typing website that offers timed lessons and speed tests. I practise for about 15–20 minutes a day, following the on-screen exercises to improve my accuracy and speed.
× I prefer the handwriting because in our child the typing and the computer haven't very famous in the society.
✓ I prefer handwriting because when I was a child typing and computers were not very common in society.
问题类型:6(现在时/过去时混用)和5(过去时问题)及11(介词/短语用法)。原句用词和时态不匹配:“in our child”应为“when I was a child”;“haven't very famous”语法错误,意图为“were not very common”。建议使用“when I was a child”引入过去时间,并将描述改为过去式“were not very common”。
× So from the I was a child, we should write the words and sentence in the paper.
✓ So from when I was a child, we had to write words and sentences on paper.
问题类型:1(单复数问题)和5(过去时问题)及11(介词用法)。原句中“the I was a child”结构错误,应为“when I was a child”;“we should write”与过去背景不符,应使用过去时“had to”或“used to”;“the words and sentence”中“sentence”需复数;“in the paper”应为“on paper”。建议:用‘when I was a child’引出时间,用过去式并把可数名词改为复数,介词改为on。
× I often tap on laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient for the laptop.
✓ I often type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's very convenient to carry a laptop around.
问题类型:26(句子结构错误)和11(介词/搭配)。原句“tap on laptop keyboard”用词不自然,动词应为“type”;“convenient for the laptop”表达错误,意图是携带方便,应改为“convenient to carry a laptop around”。建议使用常见搭配“type on a laptop keyboard”和“convenient to carry”。
× We can take it to everywhere but the desktop, we can't take it so and we can bring the laptop to the classroom.
✓ We can take it anywhere, but we can't take a desktop computer with us, so we can bring the laptop to the classroom.
问题类型:12(代词/指示词使用错误)和11(副词/介词使用)。原句“take it to everywhere”不正确,应为“take it anywhere”;重复代词“it”指代不清,改为“a desktop computer”;连接词“so”位置不当,句子需重组。建议使用“anywhere”并明确指代对象,重写句子以保持逻辑清晰。
× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
问题类型:5(过去时问题)。该句时态与上下文一致,为正确句子,无需修改。但可注意将“in primary school”保留为过去时描述。
× Our teachers particularly set on UH classes, and of course she taught us knowledge to type on the keyboard.
✓ Our teacher organized special typing classes, and of course she taught us how to type on the keyboard.
问题类型:26(句子结构错误)和12(代词单复数不一致)。原句“particularly set on UH classes”不通,推测本意为“organized special (or dedicated) classes”;“teachers”与后文“she”指代不一致,应统一为单数“teacher”或复数并用“they”;“taught us knowledge to type”不自然,应为“taught us how to type”。建议使用“organized special typing classes”并用“how to type”。
× I find a website that can offer the practice for me, that I can practice the typing skills, we can follow the sentence and the speed on the website to type the letters and to improve my skills.
✓ I found a website that offers practice for me. I can practice my typing skills there by following the sentences and the speed on the website to type the letters and improve my skills.
问题类型:8(动名词/现在分词用法)和5(过去时问题)及26(句子结构)。上文语境为过去或现在均可,但原句时态和结构混乱,应统一时态。将“I find”改为过去“I found”或改为现在“I find”和保持一致;使用“offers practice”代替“can offer the practice”;“practice the typing skills”改为“practice my typing skills”;将长句拆成两句以提高可读性。建议统一时态并用自然搭配“practice my typing skills”以及“follow the sentences and the speed”。