Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm), correct word choice (typing not tapping), and use one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Keep to fewer than five sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, typing is faster for me, and secondly, spell-check on computers and phones helps me avoid mistakes.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct answer, then give specific examples with coherent linking words. Fix grammar (required me -> requires me; typing not tap) and reduce hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I type every day on a laptop at work. My job at the front desk requires me to type emails, prepare quotations, and keep study records, so I use the keyboard constantly.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference and concise reasons. Use correct tense and nouns (learned when I was young; my grandma gave me a laptop). Avoid repetition and fillers.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was very young after my grandmother gave me a laptop. I also took typing classes at school, and practicing at home with my teacher helped me improve quickly.

Sugestão: State methods clearly and use specific examples. Use correct grammar (websites that offer online lessons; for example, Monkeytype) and use linking words (for example, also) to show sequence. Limit to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing on online typing websites, for example Monkeytype. I also practice at home regularly to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Personally I would prefer umm tapping over handwriting as because when we are typing on the computer or on the phone it likely to correct my word and also umm I'm a fast typing as well so handwriting is a bit slow for me.

✓ Personally, I would prefer typing over handwriting because when I type on the computer or on the phone it is likely to correct my words, and I type quickly, so handwriting is a bit slow for me.

Incorrect use of verb forms and gerunds: 'tapping' is wrong contextually and should be 'typing' (verb + -ing). 'I'm a fast typing' is ungrammatical; use 'I type quickly' or 'I am a fast typist'. Also 'as because' is redundant; use 'because'. Ensure subject-verb consistency ('it is likely to correct my words'). Suggestion: use the gerund 'typing' and revise surrounding structure for clarity.

× Yes, absolutely, as because I work in a front desk as well so it is required me to typing a lot whether we writing, umm, uh, quotation writing, uh, e-mail and also for my study record as well.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because I work at a front desk, so my job requires me to type a lot, whether writing quotations, emails, or study records.

Incorrect preposition: use 'at a front desk' not 'in a front desk'. Incorrect verb patterns: 'it is required me to typing' should be 'my job requires me to type'. Use 'emails' instead of 'e-mail' for consistency and pluralize items. Remove redundant 'as well'. Suggestion: use 'requires me to' + base verb and the preposition 'at'.

× I have learned how to tap on the keyboard since I was very younger as my grandma she give me a laptop and also in my school we also have accomplished the class as well.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was very young because my grandma gave me a laptop, and we also had typing classes at school.

Tense and form errors: 'I have learned... since I was very younger' mixes present perfect with a specific past time and uses incorrect comparative 'younger'. Use simple past 'learned' with past time 'when I was very young'. 'she give me' should be past 'gave me'. 'accomplished the class' is wrong; use 'had typing classes' or 'completed a typing course'. Suggestion: use simple past for past events and correct comparative and verb forms.

× So umm my teacher and myself are like tapping and writing at home so it helped me improve a lot for my type.

✓ So my teacher and I practiced typing and writing at home, which helped me improve my typing a lot.

Incorrect pronoun: use 'my teacher and I' as subject, not 'myself'. Incorrect verb agreement and awkward phrasing: 'are like tapping' is unnatural; use 'practiced typing'. 'for my type' should be 'my typing'. Use a relative clause 'which helped me' to link the ideas. Suggestion: use subject pronouns and correct noun forms ('typing').

× I improve my tapping by some website that they're offering in the online like a monkey type that is make me improve and help me tapping very fast and also I used to umm learn it at home as well practice again and again.

✓ I improved my typing using some websites available online, such as Monkeytype, which helped me become much faster, and I used to practice at home again and again.

Incorrect gerund and verb forms: 'tapping' should be 'typing'. 'I improve' inconsistent with past context; use 'I improved'. 'some website that they're offering in the online' is ungrammatical; use 'websites available online' or 'online websites'. 'that is make me improve' should be 'which helped me improve'. 'help me tapping' should be 'helped me type faster' or 'helped my typing'. Suggestion: use correct gerund 'typing', appropriate tense, and clear relative clauses.