Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and grammar mistakes, and give one specific reason with a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer handwriting to typing because I type slowly and handwriting feels more comfortable. For example, my mother encouraged me to keep a journal when I was young, so I became used to writing by hand.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence, reduce hesitations, correct grammatical structures (e.g., 'I have a personal laptop' and 'as a teacher I do a lot of documents such as lesson plans'), and include a short example or frequency phrase. Keep it concise.

Exemplo: I use my personal laptop every day to type. As a teacher I often prepare lesson plans and reports on my laptop, so I type for several hours each day.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer with correct grammar and one specific detail. Avoid vague phrases and fillers. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why and mention an example (assignments, projects) briefly.

Exemplo: I started learning to type on a keyboard in high school because computers became widely used for assignments and projects. From that time I practiced typing for schoolwork.

Sugestão: Make your answer concise and structured: state the main method first, then give one specific routine and a result. Remove repetitive phrases and filler words, and use linking words like 'by' and 'so' appropriately.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my laptop. For example, every night after school I type assignments and lesson materials, which has helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting than typing because I'm too slow to do typing and also, uh, when I was still a young I'm my mother always ask me to write on a notebook to do journaling.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I'm too slow at typing, and when I was young my mother always asked me to write in a notebook for journaling.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than' (preposition error). Use 'slow at' rather than 'slow to do' for ability. 'When I was young' is correct word order; remove extra 'still' and misplaced 'I'm'. 'Ask' should be past tense 'asked' to match 'when I was young'. Use 'write in a notebook' and 'for journaling' for natural prepositions and purpose expressions.

× So I'm really used on handwriting than typing.

✓ So I am really more used to handwriting than to typing.

Use 'used to' with 'to' (preposition). To compare, say 'more used to... than to...' or 'prefer X to Y'. The original 'used on' is incorrect preposition.

× Uh, I have personal laptop, so every day I use my laptop to type and also on my work, uh, as a teacher, we all, we do a lot of documents.

✓ I have a personal laptop, so every day I use my laptop to type, and at work as a teacher we all produce a lot of documents.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'personal laptop'. 'On my work' is incorrect preposition; use 'at work'. 'Do a lot of documents' is unnatural; use 'produce' or 'work on' documents.

× So you, we always do Lesson plan and everything.

✓ So we always prepare lesson plans and so on.

Sentence had filler words 'you, we' and capitalized 'Lesson plan' unnecessarily. Use plural 'lesson plans' and cleaner structure 'and so on' or 'and everything' is informal but change to 'and so on' for clarity.

× I think I started to learn to type in a keyboard when I was high school because that's already the time wherein technology is very, uh, used in everything, like assignments, projects.

✓ I think I started learning to type on a keyboard when I was in high school because that was already a time when technology was used in everything, like assignments and projects.

Use 'started learning' or 'started to learn' (both possible) and the preposition 'on a keyboard'. Need article 'in high school'. 'That's already the time' should be 'that was already a time' to match past context. 'Wherein' is formal/awkward; use 'when'. Use 'used in' rather than 'used in everything' and list items with 'and'.

× I already started to learn how to type.

✓ I had already started to learn how to type.

Context implies earlier action before another past reference; using past perfect 'had already started' clarifies sequence. Alternatively 'I already started learning how to type' is acceptable; suggestion uses past perfect for clarity.

× I improve my typing by doing my schoolwork and everything and a laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by doing my schoolwork on my laptop.

Original repeats and misplaces phrases. Use 'on my laptop' to indicate the device used. Remove 'and everything' which is vague.

× So every day, every night after school, we do some work, uh, work paper.

✓ So every day and every night after school we do some written work or worksheets.

'Work paper' is unnatural; 'written work' or 'worksheets' is clearer. Remove filler 'uh' and restructure 'every day and every night after school'.

× So we do typing.

✓ So we do typing practice.

Add 'practice' to clarify the activity; 'do typing' is grammatically possible but awkward. 'Do typing practice' fits present habitual action.