Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a brief supporting detail. Avoid redundant phrases and use correct comparative forms and prepositions.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s more convenient. For example, typing lets me edit quickly and keeps my work neater, which is useful for school assignments.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and fix grammar (e.g., tense and infinitive). Provide one specific detail about when and why you use the desktop, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I mainly use a desktop computer every day because I do most of my homework and projects there. For instance, I use it in the evenings to write essays and research for schoolwork.

Sugestão: Answer directly with correct past tense and concise structure. Give one specific context detail and avoid filler words like “umm” and incorrect verb forms.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was ten. My primary school had IT lessons, and my teacher showed us proper finger placement and basic typing exercises.

Sugestão: Be specific and grammatically accurate. State one or two methods clearly, use correct expressions for duration and frequency, and give a brief outcome. Avoid unclear numbers like “2/2 hour”.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practising for about 20–30 minutes every day using online typing drills. As a result, I can now type with all ten fingers more accurately and faster.

× I do prefer typing because I think it is convenient to me.

✓ I prefer typing because I think it is convenient for me.

Use of preposition: 'convenient' should be followed by 'for' when indicating who benefits. Also 'do' is unnecessary for simple preference; remove it for naturalness.

× When I'm typing, I can practice my typing skill and it is more faster and cleaner instead of handwriting.

✓ When I type, I can practice my typing skills and it is faster and cleaner than handwriting.

Tense and word choice: use simple present 'I type' for habitual actions. 'Typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills'. 'More faster' is redundant: use 'faster'. Use comparative 'than' not 'instead of' when comparing qualities.

× I almost type on a desktop for almost every day because I'm currently a high school student so I spend a lot of time on my desktop to done my assignment and some projects.

✓ I mostly type on a desktop almost every day because I'm currently a high school student, so I spend a lot of time on my desktop to do my assignments and some projects.

Prepositions and adverbs: use 'mostly' not 'almost' before verb. Remove duplicate 'almost'. Use infinitive 'to do' not 'to done'. 'Assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match 'some projects'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity.

× The first time I learned how to type on a keyboard it is when I was 10 years old.

✓ The first time I learned how to type on a keyboard was when I was 10 years old.

Tense and sentence structure: use past simple 'was' to describe the time; remove extra 'it is'. The clause should read 'was when I was 10 years old.'

× Umm, apparently when I'm studying primary school in some IT lessons my teacher teach me how to type.

✓ When I was in primary school, in some IT lessons my teacher taught me how to type.

Pronoun and verb agreement and tense: use past simple 'was' instead of 'I'm studying' for past events. 'Teach' should be past 'taught' to match past time. Reorder phrase 'in primary school' for natural word order.

× There are some ways that I usually improve my typing.

✓ There are some ways I usually improve my typing.

Quantifier and redundancy: 'There are some ways that' is wordy; remove 'that' for conciseness. The sentence is grammatical but can be simplified.

× Firstly, I spend about 2/2 hour per days on typing on a desktop and I usually type by 10 fingers more smoothly.

✓ Firstly, I spend about two hours per day typing on a desktop, and I usually type with all ten fingers more smoothly.

Quantifier and number format: '2/2 hour' is incorrect; use 'two hours'. Use singular 'per day' not 'per days'. Use 'typing' without extra 'on'. 'By 10 fingers' should be 'with all ten fingers'. Add comma before 'and' for clarity.