Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and add a linking phrase plus a specific example. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain why with one concrete example. Avoid repeating similar ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s neater and much faster. For example, during meetings I can quickly record key points and share the notes with colleagues immediately, which saves time and reduces errors.

Sugestão: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Add a linking word to explain reason and a short detail about frequency or context. Fix tense and word order.

Exemplo: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because my company provided me with a work laptop. As a result, I use it every day for emails and documents.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer with a time reference and one specific detail. Use linking words to clarify uncertainty and correct grammar (verb forms, articles).

Exemplo: I learned to type around primary or early secondary school during a computer class, although I can’t remember the exact year. In that course we practiced basic typing exercises and simple word-processing tasks.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide a concrete method or example of practice. Add a linking word to show cause and effect.

Exemplo: I improve my typing mainly by practicing every day at work, so my speed and accuracy have gradually increased. I also use short online exercises during breaks to work on my weak keys.

× I prefer typing because my handwriting is not that good and I think typing is faster than handwriting, especially when I need to take a note in the meeting.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is not that good and I think typing is faster than handwriting, especially when I need to take notes in meetings.

Article and count noun use: 'a note' is specific singular, but the context means notes in general so use plural 'notes'. 'the meeting' implies a specific meeting; in general context use 'meetings'. Use plural for general habitual actions. Suggestion: Use 'take notes in meetings' for general habitual situations.

× Normally I type on a laptop keyboard because I have already working laptop from my company, so I used to typing on the laptop.

✓ Normally I type on a laptop keyboard because my company already provided a working laptop, so I am used to typing on a laptop.

Subject-verb and verb form errors: 'I have already working laptop' is ungrammatical; need an article and correct verb: 'my company already provided a working laptop' or 'I already have a working laptop from my company'. 'used to typing' should be 'used to typing' with 'am' for present state: 'am used to typing'. Suggestion: Use correct article and verb ('a working laptop') and the expression 'be used to + -ing' for familiarity.

× I think it was on my secondary school or elementary school, I cannot remember it exactly but it on the computer subject that we are all need to start typing.

✓ I think it was in secondary or elementary school; I cannot remember exactly, but it was in the computer class where we all needed to start learning to type.

Preposition and tense errors: use 'in' for school levels ('in secondary school'), not 'on'. 'It on the computer subject' is incorrect; use 'it was in the computer class/subject'. 'We are all need' should be past tense 'we all needed' to match 'it was'. Also 'start typing' is fine but 'start learning to type' is clearer. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense and use 'in' for institutions ('in school'), and correct verb agreement ('needed').

× I typing a lot when I am working, so I think typing every day helps a lot to improve my typing.

✓ I type a lot when I am working, so I think typing every day helps a lot to improve my typing.

Verb form error: 'I typing' lacks auxiliary or correct simple present; use 'I type' for habitual action. The rest is fine. 'helps a lot to improve my typing' is acceptable though 'helps me improve my typing' is better. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions ('I type a lot') and consider 'helps me improve my typing' for clarity.