Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
Personally for me, I don't think my handwriting is very good, so I'll prefer more for typing and also the the AI in my computer can help me to, uh, fix my typing mistakes.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
I used to type on my laptop every day since I was in grade 3. My teacher always requires us to do some projects and in the laptop. And naturally I type have already typed for in the laptop for six years.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in grade three. It was the first time that my teacher requires us to make a PPT with my laptop, and PPT must contain some of the words. So typing, uh becomes very necessary for me.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I improve my typing naturally by typing more of my documents or puppy that my teachers was teacher requires us to do for like natural leave. After six years my tapping becomes more faster than I have expected in grade three since I was in grade 3.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 简洁表达偏好并减少重复,纠正语法和填充词。可以用一句话表明偏好,接着用一两句给出具体原因并用连接词衔接。例如指出字迹不好和电脑自动校对的优势。注意避免重复单词(如“the the”)和过多停顿词(如“uh”)。
Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy and typing is faster. Moreover, spellcheck and AI tools on my computer help me correct mistakes, so my written work looks more professional.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 使用正确时态与简洁句子说明现在或过去的习惯,避免混淆(例如“used to”与现在仍在做的行为)。用一两句说明具体情况和时间线,去掉多余词汇并修正语法。
Exemplo: I have been typing on a laptop every day since grade three because my teachers often assign projects that require it. In total, I've been using a laptop for typing for about six years.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答要更流畅并用连词衔接原因。将时态统一(过去式)并更具体说明情境(例如制作PPT需要输入文字)。减少填充词“uh”。
Exemplo: I learned to type in grade three when my teacher asked us to make a PowerPoint presentation. Since the slides needed written content, typing quickly became essential for completing the assignment.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答需更清晰、逻辑更强,避免无意义或错误的词(如“puppy”,“tapping”)。直接说明通过大量练习、完成作业和使用练习软件来提高,并给出具体结果或时间框架。注意语法和比较结构的使用。
Exemplo: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice—completing school assignments and typing essays every week. I also used online typing exercises, and after six years my typing speed became much faster than when I started in grade three.
× Personally for me, I don't think my handwriting is very good, so I'll prefer more for typing and also the the AI in my computer can help me to, uh, fix my typing mistakes.
✓ Personally, I don't think my handwriting is very good, so I prefer typing, and the AI on my computer can help me fix my typing mistakes.
问题类型:12 – 代词/短语使用不当。说明:句首“Personally for me”冗余,二者意义重复,应该保留一个。短语“I'll prefer more for typing”搭配错误,应使用一般现在时“prefer typing”表达习惯或偏好。介词搭配“in my computer”不自然,应改为“on my computer”。此外多余的重复词“the the”及语气词“uh”应删除。建议:简化表达,保持时态一致,使用正确介词。
× I used to type on my laptop every day since I was in grade 3.
✓ I have typed on my laptop every day since I was in grade 3.
问题类型:6 – 现在时问题。说明:句中使用“used to”表示过去习惯,但与“since I was in grade 3”这种表示从过去持续到现在的表达不匹配。应使用现在完成时(have typed)表示从过去开始持续到现在的动作。建议:用现在完成时与since连用。
× My teacher always requires us to do some projects and in the laptop.
✓ My teacher always requires us to do some projects on the laptop.
问题类型:26 – 句子结构错误。说明:原句“and in the laptop”结构混乱,“and”连接两部分不对应;“in the laptop”介词使用错误,正确应为“on the laptop”。建议:合并为一句并用正确介词。
× And naturally I type have already typed for in the laptop for six years.
✓ And naturally I have already typed on the laptop for six years.
问题类型:6 – 现在时问题(现在完成时使用错误)。说明:原句“I type have already typed for in the laptop for six years”词序和介词错误,应该使用现在完成时“have already typed”来表示持续的经历,介词应为“on”。建议:整理词序,使用现在完成时并用正确介词。
× I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in grade three.
✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was in grade three.
问题类型:5 – 过去时问题。说明:此句时态与语境匹配,语法正确,无需修改。建议:保持该表达。
× It was the first time that my teacher requires us to make a PPT with my laptop, and PPT must contain some of the words.
✓ It was the first time that my teacher required us to make a PPT with my laptop, and the PPT had to contain some words.
问题类型:5 – 过去时问题(动词时态不一致)及17 – 冠词使用不当。说明:主句是过去时“was”,从句也应使用过去时“required”而不是现在时“requires”。“PPT must contain”在回述过去经历时应使用“had to contain”。此外“PPT”前加定冠词“the”。建议:时态一致,注意冠词使用。
× So typing, uh becomes very necessary for me.
✓ So typing became very necessary for me.
问题类型:26 – 句子结构错误(时态和填充词)。说明:句前文在讲过去经历,时态应为过去时“became”。语气词“uh”应删除。建议:保持时态一致,去掉口语填充词。
× I improve my typing naturally by typing more of my documents or puppy that my teachers was teacher requires us to do for like natural leave.
✓ I improved my typing naturally by typing more of the documents that my teachers required us to do for classwork.
问题类型:12 – 代词/名词使用不当;5 – 过去时问题;26 – 句子结构错误。说明:原句包含错误词“puppy”和重复“teachers was teacher”,混乱不通。结合上下文应表过去的做法,用过去时“improved”;“the documents that my teachers required us to do”更清晰,表示老师布置的作业(classwork)。建议:去掉无意义词,纠正人称和时态,简化句子使意思明确。
× After six years my tapping becomes more faster than I have expected in grade three since I was in grade 3.
✓ After six years my typing became faster than I expected when I was in grade three.
问题类型:25 – 比较/用词错误;6 – 现在时问题。说明:单词“tapping”应为“typing”。比较级不能用“more faster”,正确为“faster”。时态应与叙述的过去经历一致,使用过去时“became”及“expected”。重复“since I was in grade 3”可改为“when I was in grade three”。建议:用正确词汇,比较级只用“faster”,确保时态一致并删去重复信息。