Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I prefer typing because in this way it's faster to write something and my writing will look neater. Whenever I make a typos, I simply delete or edit instead of crossing things out so there are no missing Marks and don't waste extra papers for making drafts.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I do most of my academic work on it. For example, I will use it to write some essays or just practice structuring arguments. I also use digital noting to analyze articles because it's easy to review later.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I learned to type in my primary school. At that time we had a computer course. We practiced the typing in Chinese texts using the ping in method, but I didn't like that listen much because they felt like a digital version of Chinese homework.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I think regularly using keyboard is the best way to improve typing. For example, I type every day to handle digital coursework and also this constant practice made me more familiar with the input method and build up my muscle memory for typing. So I think regularly use is the best form.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 72.0Sugestão: 回答较自然且信息相关,但存在语法和用词错误(例如 typos 应为 typo,missing Marks 不恰当,don't waste extra papers 的时态和搭配可改进)。句子较长且略显重复,超过最佳句数限制。建议用一到两句主题句直接回答,再用一到两句具体且简洁的细节支持,注意复数/单数和大写,以及连贯连接词的使用。
Exemplo: I prefer typing because it's faster and produces neater text. For example, I can quickly delete or edit mistakes without crossing things out, which saves paper and makes my notes easier to read.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答结构清晰,信息具体且相关,使用了举例支持。但存在小问题如 will use 在描述习惯时应使用一般现在时(use),digital noting 表达不够地道(可以说 digital note-taking)。建议把句子控制在最多五句内,使用适当时态并替换更自然的短语。
Exemplo: Yes, I use my laptop every day because I do most of my academic work on it. For instance, I use it to write essays and practice structuring arguments, and I take digital notes to analyze articles so I can review them easily later.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答包含时间和背景,但语法和用词错误较多(primary school 可用 in primary school 或 at primary school;the typing 不需定冠词;ping in 应为 “pinyin”;listen 应为 liked,they 指代不明)。表达不够流畅且有模糊代词。建议直接说出时间并简洁描述学习方式和感受,避免不清晰的代词并纠正拼写。
Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in primary school during a computer class. We practiced typing Chinese characters using the pinyin input method, but I didn't enjoy it because it felt like another piece of homework.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 66.0Sugestão: 回答表达了主要观点并给出例子,但存在语法时态混用(made 应为 makes 或 use present perfect),短语重复且结尾冗余。词汇搭配上可改进(regularly using the keyboard, build up → build)。建议用一到两句主题句加一到两句具体方法,注意时态一致与动词形式。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by using the keyboard regularly. For instance, I type every day for coursework and practice exercises, which helps me become familiar with the input method and build muscle memory.
× I prefer typing because in this way it's faster to write something and my writing will look neater.
✓ I prefer typing because in this way it's faster to write something and my writing looks neater.
句子中“will look”使用了将来时,语境是在表达偏好和通常情况,应该用一般现在时“looks”。建议:描述习惯或普遍事实时用一般现在时。
× Whenever I make a typos, I simply delete or edit instead of crossing things out so there are no missing Marks and don't waste extra papers for making drafts.
✓ Whenever I make typos, I simply delete or edit instead of crossing things out so there are no missing marks and I don't waste extra paper on drafts.
原句有多个问题:1) “a typos”中冠词与复数名词不一致,应去掉不定冠词并用复数“typos”(对应类型1或22,但按指示只改符合列表的类型,主要为代词/冠词问题归为代词错误);2) “Marks”不需要大写,且一般用小写“marks”;3) 缺少主语“I”在“don't waste”前;4) “extra papers”更自然为不可数“extra paper”。建议:注意冠词与名词数一致,句子并列时确保每一分句都有主语,名词的可数性要匹配。
× Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I do most of my academic work on it.
✓ Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because I do most of my academic work on it.
该句本身时态正确,属于一般现在时表达习惯行为,无需修改。保留原句。说明:描述日常习惯应使用一般现在时。
× For example, I will use it to write some essays or just practice structuring arguments.
✓ For example, I use it to write essays or to practice structuring arguments.
句中“will use”暗示将来,但说话者在讲述常规用途,应使用一般现在时“use”;此外“write some essays”更简洁为“write essays”,“just practice”改为不定式“to practice”与前项并列更清晰。建议:描述常规用途用一般现在时,并保持并列结构一致。
× I also use digital noting to analyze articles because it's easy to review later.
✓ I also use digital note-taking to analyze articles because it's easy to review later.
“digital noting”搭配不自然,应使用“digital note-taking”(动名词短语)表示记笔记的动作或方法。建议:学习常见搭配,如“note-taking”。
× I learned to type in my primary school.
✓ I learned to type at my primary school.
主要问题是介词用法,应使用“at my primary school”表示在某所学校学会。并且过去时“learned”正确。建议:表示地点的学校常用介词“at”。
× We practiced the typing in Chinese texts using the ping in method, but I didn't like that listen much because they felt like a digital version of Chinese homework.
✓ We practiced typing Chinese texts using the pinyin input method, but I didn't like that method much because it felt like a digital version of Chinese homework.
原句问题:1) “the typing”多余,改为动名词“typing”;2) “ping in”应为“pinyin”或“pinyin input method”;3) “that listen much”有误,应该是“that method much”或“it much”;4) 主语一致性要用单数“it felt”。建议:注意专有名词拼写(pinyin),动名词用法,以及代词与先行词一致。
× I think regularly using keyboard is the best way to improve typing.
✓ I think regularly using a keyboard is the best way to improve typing.
需要在“keyboard”前加不定冠词“a”,表示泛指一个键盘。时态使用一般现在时正确。建议:可数名词前注意冠词。
× For example, I type every day to handle digital coursework and also this constant practice made me more familiar with the input method and build up my muscle memory for typing.
✓ For example, I type every day to handle digital coursework, and this constant practice has made me more familiar with the input method and has helped build up my muscle memory for typing.
句中时态不一致:开始部分为一般现在时“type every day”,而后半句用过去时“made”造成时态冲突,应使用现在完成时“has made”表示从过去到现在的持续影响;并且“build up”需与“has helped”连用或改为“has helped build up”。建议:保持句子时态一致,描述从过去持续到现在的结果用现在完成时。
× So I think regularly use is the best form.
✓ So I think regular use is the best approach.
原句“regularly use”语法不当,副词+动词在此位置不合适,应使用名词短语“regular use”或形容词“regular”+名词,且“form”用“approach”更自然。建议:注意词类搭配,选择名词短语表达抽象概念。