Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I think I would say I prefer to have writings because I write like to write some things on the papers in it Help me uh, Smurfs my uh, thinking.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Every time on the laptop, every day examine data and list. So I need to type my code on the computers. For example, I need to uh, negotiate with the AI for uh, organize some ideas.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
I think I would say a star type the keyboard on since I was elementary school students because as a computer class upon that time. So I start type on the computers since I was pretty young.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I just, uh, keep practicing, practice and practicing because it need to take time to practice about the type you need to uh, memorize the old locations of the keyboards.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接和流利,减少犹豫词和重复。先给出一个明确的主题句(例如“I prefer handwriting.”),然后用一两句具体原因支持(例如帮助思考、记忆等)。注意语法(例如用“I like to write things on paper”而不是“I write like to write”)。整体控制在3-4句之内。
Exemplo: I prefer handwriting. Writing things on paper helps me organize my thoughts and remember information better. For example, I often make quick notes and diagrams when I am planning a project.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答需要更有条理并使用正确的时态和搭配。先用一句话回答问题(例如“I type on a laptop every day.”),然后用一两句具体说明用途(例如工作或学习任务)。避免不必要的填充词,改进短语搭配(例如“type code”而不是“type my code on the computers”)。
Exemplo: I type on a laptop every day. I usually use it to analyze data and write code for my projects. I also use online tools and AI to help me organize ideas and draft documents.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要更清晰并使用正确的时态和单复数形式。先给出时间点(例如“I learned to type in elementary school.”),然后补充具体情况(例如上计算机课)。避免冗长或重复表达。
Exemplo: I learned to type in elementary school when we had computer classes. I started practicing regularly then, so I have been typing since I was quite young.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答应更简洁并用自然表达说明方法。用一到两句说明具体练习方式(例如每天练习打字、使用打字软件、练习正确指法),并解释效果。去掉重复词和犹豫音。
Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises to build speed and accuracy. I also focus on learning proper finger placement so I can type without looking at the keyboard.
× I think I would say I prefer to have writings because I write like to write some things on the papers in it Help me uh, Smurfs my uh, thinking.
✓ I think I would say I prefer handwritten writing because I like to write some things on paper; it helps me organize my thinking.
错误类型:冠词/词类使用不当(Article errors)。句中“have writings”“on the papers in it”等短语不符合英语习惯。应使用“handwritten writing”或更自然的“handwriting/handwritten notes”,并使用不可数名词“paper”而不是“the papers”。此外原句语序混乱,应把“it helps me organize my thinking”放在句尾作为原因说明。建议:用更自然的名词短语(handwriting / handwritten notes / write on paper),去掉多余冠词,并调整语序。
× Every time on the laptop, every day examine data and list. So I need to type my code on the computers. For example, I need to uh, negotiate with the AI for uh, organize some ideas.
✓ I use a laptop every day to examine data and make lists, so I need to type code on the computer. For example, I need to interact with AI to organize my ideas.
错误类型:现在时态/时态搭配问题(Present tense issue)。原句“Every time on the laptop, every day examine data and list.” 时态和句子结构不完整,动词形式缺失。应使用一般现在时的完整句子结构:主语+动词(I use... to examine... and make lists)。“computers”改为单数“computer”更自然(指使用的一台笔记本)。“negotiate with the AI for organize some ideas”用词不当,应改为“interact with AI to organize my ideas”。建议:用完整的主谓结构,一般现在时描述日常活动,选择更恰当的动词。
× I think I would say a star type the keyboard on since I was elementary school students because as a computer class upon that time. So I start type on the computers since I was pretty young.
✓ I think I started typing on a keyboard when I was in elementary school because we had computer classes then. So I have been typing on computers since I was quite young.
错误类型:过去时/时态错误(Past tense issue)。原句时态混用且动词形式错误:应使用过去式“started”描述开始学打字的动作;“since I was elementary school students”人称和数不匹配,应为“when I was in elementary school”。第二句应使用现在完成时(have been typing... since...)表示从过去持续到现在的动作。建议:用past simple表述动作的起点(started),用present perfect或present perfect continuous表示持续至今(have been typing)。
× I just, uh, keep practicing, practice and practicing because it need to take time to practice about the type you need to uh, memorize the old locations of the keyboards.
✓ I just keep practicing, because it takes time to learn typing; you need to memorize the key locations on the keyboard.
错误类型:动词+ -ing形式及主谓一致(Verb + -ing form / Subject-verb agreement)。原句“keep practicing, practice and practicing”重复且不规范,应简化为“keep practicing”。“it need to take time”主语与动词不一致,应为“it takes time”。“practice about the type”措辞不当,改为“learn typing”或“learn to type”。最后“locations of the keyboards”应为“key locations on the keyboard”。建议:使用固定搭配“keep practicing”,保证主谓一致(it takes),用更准确短语描述“记住键位”。