Typing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., 'I love computers' and 'I'm not good at handwriting'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer typing to handwriting because I find it faster and neater. For example, typing helps me edit mistakes quickly and keep my notes organized on my laptop.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear subject sentence and add a brief specific reason or frequency detail. Improve grammar (use 'I have a laptop' and 'every day' or 'not every day'). Use a linking word to expand slightly.

Exemplo: I have a laptop, but I don't use it every day because I mainly use my phone for quick tasks. I use the laptop for longer typing or study sessions on weekends.

Sugestão: Give a clear time reference (e.g., 'when I was in elementary school') and connect it to the reason briefly. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and incomplete phrases. Use a linking word to show cause.

Exemplo: I learned to type when I was in elementary school because I loved playing computer games, which pushed me to become faster at using the keyboard.

Sugestão: Respond in first person and be specific: state your own method, give one or two concrete ways to practice, and avoid repetitions and hesitations. Mention a specific resource or exercise and use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Exemplo: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day using online typing tests and lessons. For example, I use a free typing website to track accuracy and speed and focus on the keys I mistype.

× I prefer typing because I love computer and also I also love navigating while handwritten.

✓ I prefer typing because I love computers and I also like handwriting.

The student used incorrect articles and noun forms. 'Computer' as a general activity should be plural 'computers' or 'using computers', and 'love navigating while handwritten' is ungrammatical. Also duplicate 'also' removed and verb choice corrected: use 'like handwriting' to express preference for writing by hand. Suggestion: say 'I love using computers' or 'I love computers' and 'I also like handwriting.'

× Handwritten is I'm not good in handwriting.

✓ Handwriting-wise, I'm not good at handwriting.

The original mixes adjective/noun forms and uses incorrect preposition. 'Handwritten' is an adjective; here the noun 'handwriting' is needed. Also 'good in' should be 'good at.' Suggestion: use 'I'm not good at handwriting' or 'I'm not good at writing by hand.'

× I do have laptop but I don't use it every day.

✓ I do have a laptop, but I don't use it every day.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop' is an article error (treated here as requiring noun phrase correction) and comma improves clarity. Suggestion: include articles with singular countable nouns: 'a laptop.'

× When I was an elementary, I loved, uh, playing computer games.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I loved playing computer games.

The phrase 'when I was an elementary' is ungrammatical; use 'in elementary school' to indicate schooling period. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: say 'When I was in elementary school' or specify 'When I was in elementary school, I loved playing computer games.'

× You can improve your typing by practicing it every day because uh, we you can, you can, uh, practice it to, to, uh, free typing test.

✓ You can improve your typing by practicing every day because you can use free typing tests to practice.

Original mixes pronouns 'we' and 'you' and has redundant fillers and wrong verb patterns. 'Practice it to free typing test' is incorrect; use 'use free typing tests to practice.' Suggestion: keep consistent pronoun 'you' for advice and simplify: 'You can improve your typing by practicing every day and using free typing tests.'

× You can search it in, in Google.

✓ You can search for them on Google.

Use correct preposition: 'search for' something and platform 'on Google.' Also 'it' should match plurality ('tests' -> 'them'). Suggestion: 'You can search for free typing tests on Google.'