Part 1
Examinador
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidato
I think it depends what I'm doing. For school I usually type in but if I am writing my diary or making check this I like to use handwriting.
Examinador
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidato
Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because most of my assignment or projects need to done in my computer.
Examinador
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidato
To be honest, I only start to learn how to type on a keyboard last year when I threw my own mess book. I'm still learning now.
Examinador
How do you improve your typing?
Candidato
I try to type every day and I use some websites like typing clothes to help me work on my typing skill and website makes more interesting and help me get faster.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答有明确的立场,但语法和表达不够准确,内容重复且有词汇错误。建议:1) 用一开始一句话明确回答(topic sentence),如“I prefer typing for school work, but handwriting for personal notes.” 2) 修正语法错误(e.g., “type in”→“type”, “making check this”→“making checklists”)。3) 增加一两句具体原因,并用连接词(because, while)使逻辑更清晰。
Exemplo: I usually prefer typing for schoolwork because it’s faster and easier to edit, while I choose handwriting for my diary and checklists because it feels more personal and helps me remember things better.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答直接但有语法和词序问题,缺少流畅连接。建议:1) 使用简洁的主题句回答(Yes/No + short reason)。2) 修正语法(“most of my assignment or projects need to done in my computer”→“most of my assignments and projects need to be done on my computer”)。3) 可补充一两个具体细节说明频率或用途。
Exemplo: Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because most of my assignments and projects need to be done on my computer. I use it for writing essays, programming and preparing presentations.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 答案有内容但表达混乱,时态错误和用词不当影响理解。建议:1) 用正确时态(past tense)说明时间点,例如“I started learning to type last year.” 2) 去掉不清楚的短语(“threw my own mess book”不通),改为清晰原因,如“when I needed to do more computer work”。3) 可补充学习方式或进步情况作为支持细节。
Exemplo: I started learning to type last year when I began doing more computer-based coursework. I began with online tutorials and now I can type much more accurately than before.
How do you improve your typing?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 回答有意思但词汇和句子结构有误,且表达重复。建议:1) 用一两句清楚说明方法(practice daily + specific resources)。2) 修正词汇错误(“typing clothes”→可能是“typing clubs”或“typing courses/websites”),并用连接词说明效果(so/which helps)。3) 给出具体例子或频率以增加细节。
Exemplo: I practice typing every day and use online typing courses and games to improve. These websites make practice more interesting and have helped me increase my speed and accuracy.
× For school I usually type in but if I am writing my diary or making check this I like to use handwriting.
✓ For school I usually type, but if I am writing my diary or making a checklist I like to use handwriting.
句子结构混乱,有多处问题:1) “type in” 在此不需要“in”,应为“type”;2) 缺少逗号连接两个并列分句;3) “making check this” 是错误表达,应该是“making a checklist”(制作清单)。建议把句子分成并列分句,使用正确的名词短语。
× Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because most of my assignment or projects need to done in my computer.
✓ Yes, I use my laptop keyboard every day because most of my assignments or projects need to be done on my computer.
“assignment”应使用复数“assignments”与“most of”搭配;此外还修正了被动结构(need to be done)和介词(on my computer)。建议注意量词与名词数一致,并使用正确的被动结构和介词。
× To be honest, I only start to learn how to type on a keyboard last year when I threw my own mess book. I'm still learning now.
✓ To be honest, I only started to learn how to type on a keyboard last year when I threw away my old mess book. I'm still learning now.
句中表示过去的时间“last year”应使用过去时“started”,原句使用现在时“start”不正确;此外“threw my own mess book” 表达不自然,应为“threw away my old mess book” 表示丢弃旧书。建议注意时间状语与动词时态一致,并使用正确的短语动词。
× I try to type every day and I use some websites like typing clothes to help me work on my typing skill and website makes more interesting and help me get faster.
✓ I try to type every day and I use some websites like TypingClub to help me work on my typing skills; the websites make it more interesting and help me get faster.
1) “typing skill” 应为复数“typing skills”;2) 网站名应为“TypingClub”(若指特定网站);3) 原句“website makes more interesting” 缺主语后宾语结构,应为“the websites make it more interesting”;4) 并列结构需用连接词或分号。建议使用正确名词形式,完整主谓结构,并把并列分句清晰连接。